The Lute Player

by Andrew Lang · from The Violet Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1467 words 7 min read
Cover: The Lute Player

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 419 words 2 min Canon 92/100

A king and queen loved each other. They were happy. They lived in a big castle. Each day, they smiled.

But the king wanted a trip. He went to a far land. One day, he felt restless. He wanted to see new places. He said goodbye to the queen. He traveled far away.

In the far land, a mean king ruled. The mean king captured him. The good king had to work very hard. He worked all day. He was tired and sad.

The king sent a letter later. He asked for help. He wrote to the queen. He said, 'Help me.' The letter was sad.

The queen was brave. She loved the king. She wanted to save him. So, she made a plan. She cut her hair short. She put on boy's clothes. She took her lute. She left the castle. She walked alone to find him.

She walked to the mean king's city. The city was big and scary. She saw the prison. Then, she played her lute outside the palace. Her music was nice.

The mean king heard the music. He came out of the palace. He loved the song. He said, 'You play well. I give a wish.'

The lute player played for a while. She played more songs. The mean king listened. After a while, she stopped. She asked, 'Can I have one captive?'

The mean king said yes. He took her to the prison. She looked at the captives. She chose the good king.

The lute player led the king home. They walked along. At the border, she said goodbye. He did not know she was the queen.

The queen took a quick way home. She ran home fast. She took a shortcut. She changed into her queen clothes. She was ready.

The king came home slowly. He was upset. He thought the queen did not help him. He did not smile.

The queen wanted to show him. She put on her boy's clothes again. She played her lute outside the palace. She sang the same song.

The king heard the song. He knew it. He went outside. He brought the lute player inside. He said, 'I will give you a gift.'

The lute player smiled. She took off her hat. Her hair was short. The king saw her face. She was the queen.

The king was very happy. He hugged the queen. He said, 'Thanks.' He gave a big party. All danced and sang.

And so, love and courage saved the day.

Original Story 1467 words · 7 min read

THE LUTE PLAYER

Once upon a time there was a king and queen who lived happily and

comfortably together. They were very fond of each other and had nothing

to worry them, but at last the king grew restless. He longed to go out

into the world, to try his strength in battle against some enemy and to

win all kinds of honour and glory.

So he called his army together and gave orders to start for a distant

country where a heathen king ruled who ill-treated or tormented everyone

he could lay his hands on. The king then gave his parting orders and

wise advice to his ministers, took a tender leave of his wife, and set

off with his army across the seas.

I cannot say whether the voyage was short or long; but at last he

reached the country of the heathen king and marched on, defeating all

who came in his way. But this did not last long, for in time he came

to a mountain pass, where a large army was waiting for him, who put his

soldiers to flight, and took the king himself prisoner.

He was carried off to the prison where the heathen king kept his

captives, and now our poor friend had a very bad time indeed. All night

long the prisoners were chained up, and in the morning they were yoked

together like oxen and had to plough the land till it grew dark.

This state of things went on for three years before the king found

any means of sending news of himself to his dear queen, but at last he

contrived to send this letter: ‘Sell all our castles and palaces,

and put all our treasures in pawn and come and deliver me out of this

horrible prison.’

The queen received the letter, read it, and wept bitterly as she said to

herself, ‘How can I deliver my dearest husband? If I go myself and the

heathen king sees me he will just take me to be one of his wives. If I

were to send one of the ministers!--but I hardly know if I can depend on

them.’

She thought, and thought, and at last an idea came into her head.

She cut off all her beautiful long brown hair and dressed herself in

boy’s clothes. Then she took her lute and, without saying anything to

anyone, she went forth into the wide world.

She travelled through many lands and saw many cities, and went through

many hardships before she got to the town where the heathen king lived.

When she got there she walked all round the palace and at the back

she saw the prison. Then she went into the great court in front of

the palace, and taking her lute in her hand, she began to play so

beautifully that one felt as though one could never hear enough.

After she had played for some time she began to sing, and her voice was

sweeter than the lark’s:

 ‘I come from my own country far

       Into this foreign land,

  Of all I own I take alone

       My sweet lute in my hand.



 ‘Oh!  who will thank me for my song,

       Reward my simple lay?

   Like lover’s sighs it still shall rise

       To greet thee day by day.



 ‘I sing of blooming flowers

       Made sweet by sun and rain;

  Of all the bliss of love’s first kiss,

       And parting’s cruel pain.



 ‘Of the sad captive’s longing

       Within his prison wall,

  Of hearts that sigh when none are nigh

       To answer to their call.



 ‘My song begs for your pity,

       And gifts from out your store,

  And as I play my gentle lay

      I linger near your door.



 ‘And if you hear my singing

      Within your palace, sire,

 Oh! give, I pray, this happy day,

      To me my heart’s desire.’

No sooner had the heathen king heard this touching song sung by such a

lovely voice, than he had the singer brought before him.

‘Welcome, O lute player,’ said he. ‘Where do you come from?’

‘My country, sire, is far away across many seas. For years I have been

wandering about the world and gaining my living by my music.’

‘Stay here then a few days, and when you wish to leave I will give you

what you ask for in your song--your heart’s desire.’

So the lute player stayed on in the palace and sang and played almost

all day long to the king, who could never tire of listening and almost

forgot to eat or drink or to torment people.

He cared for nothing but the music, and nodded his head as he declared,

‘That’s something like playing and singing. It makes me feel as if some

gentle hand had lifted every care and sorrow from me.’

After three days the lute player came to take leave of the king.

‘Well,’ said the king, ‘what do you desire as your reward?’

‘Sire, give me one of your prisoners. You have so many in your prison,

and I should be glad of a companion on my journeys. When I hear his

happy voice as I travel along I shall think of you and thank you.’

‘Come along then,’ said the king, ‘choose whom you will.’ And he took

the lute player through the prison himself.

The queen walked about amongst the prisoners, and at length she picked

out her husband and took him with her on her journey. They were long on

their way, but he never found out who she was, and she led him nearer

and nearer to his own country.

When they reached the frontier the prisoner said:

‘Let me go now, kind lad; I am no common prisoner, but the king of this

country. Let me go free and ask what you will as your reward.’

‘Do not speak of reward,’ answered the lute player. ‘Go in peace.’

‘Then come with me, dear boy, and be my guest.’

‘When the proper time comes I shall be at your palace,’ was the reply,

and so they parted.

The queen took a short way home, got there before the king and changed

her dress.

An hour later all the people in the palace were running to and fro and

crying out: ‘Our king has come back! Our king has returned to us.’

The king greeted every one very kindly, but he would not so much as look

at the queen.

Then he called all his council and ministers together and said to them:

‘See what sort of a wife I have. Here she is falling on my neck, but

when I was pining in prison and sent her word of it she did nothing to

help me.’

And his council answered with one voice, ‘Sire, when news was brought

from you the queen disappeared and no one knew where she went. She only

returned to-day.’

Then the king was very angry and cried, ‘Judge my faithless wife!

Never would you have seen your king again, if a young lute player had

not delivered him. I shall remember him with love and gratitude as long

as I live.’

Whilst the king was sitting with his council, the queen found time to

disguise herself. She took her lute, and slipping into the court in

front of the palace she sang, clear and sweet:

 ‘I sing the captive’s longing

       Within his prison wall,

  Of hearts that sigh when none are nigh

       To answer to their call.



 ‘My song begs for your pity,

       And gifts from out your store,

  And as I play my gentle lay

       I linger near your door.



 ‘And if you hear my singing

       Within your palace, sire,

  Oh!  give, I pray, this happy day,

       To me my heart’s desire.’

As soon as the king heard this song he ran out to meet the lute player,

took him by the hand and led him into the palace.

‘Here,’ he cried, ‘is the boy who released me from my prison. And now,

my true friend, I will indeed give you your heart’s desire.’

‘I am sure you will not be less generous than the heathen king was,

sire. I ask of you what I asked and obtained from him. But this time I

don’t mean to give up what I get. I want YOU--yourself!’

And as she spoke she threw off her long cloak and everyone saw it was

the queen.

Who can tell how happy the king was? In the joy of his heart he gave a

great feast to the whole world, and the whole world came and rejoiced

with him for a whole week.

I was there too, and ate and drank many good things. I sha’n’t forget

that feast as long as I live.

(From the Russian.)


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love and devotion can overcome great obstacles, and appearances can be deceiving.

Plot Summary

A king, seeking glory, is captured and enslaved by a heathen king. His devoted queen, upon receiving his plea for help, disguises herself as a male lute player and travels to the enemy kingdom. She charms the heathen king with her music, requests a prisoner as her reward, and cleverly chooses her husband, leading him home without revealing her identity. Upon his return, the king publicly condemns his wife for her perceived inaction, but the queen, still in disguise, sings her song, revealing her true identity and the full extent of her courageous rescue, leading to a joyous reconciliation and celebration.

Themes

love and devotioncourage and resourcefulnessmisjudgment and redemptionthe power of art

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (at the end), song lyrics embedded in narrative

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (king vs heathen king, queen vs circumstances, king vs queen's perceived inaction)
Ending: happy
Magic: the almost magical effect of the lute player's music on the heathen king
the lute (representing art, disguise, and the queen's agency)the boy's clothes (representing transformation and freedom)the song (representing communication, emotion, and a plea)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects common fairy tale tropes of royal courts, distant wars, and the resourcefulness of women in disguise, prevalent across many European folk traditions.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A king, restless despite happiness, decides to go to war in a distant land.
  2. The king is defeated in battle and captured by a heathen king, forced into hard labor.
  3. After three years, the king sends a letter to his queen, asking her to sell everything to ransom him.
  4. The queen, determined to rescue her husband, cuts her hair, dresses as a boy, takes her lute, and sets out alone.
  5. She travels to the heathen king's city, finds the prison, and then plays and sings in front of the palace.
  6. The heathen king is captivated by her music and invites her into the palace, promising her heart's desire as a reward.
  7. After three days of playing, the lute player asks for one prisoner as her reward.
  8. The heathen king agrees, and the lute player chooses her husband from the prison.
  9. The queen leads her husband home, maintaining her disguise, and they part ways at the border.
  10. The queen takes a shortcut, arrives home before the king, and changes back into her royal attire.
  11. The king returns, but instead of greeting the queen, he publicly condemns her for not helping him.
  12. The queen, disguised once more as the lute player, sings her song outside the palace.
  13. The king recognizes the song, brings the lute player inside, and offers a reward.
  14. The lute player reveals herself as the queen, proving her loyalty and resourcefulness.
  15. The king is overjoyed, and a grand feast is held to celebrate their reunion.

Characters 3 characters

The King ★ protagonist

human adult male

Strong, capable of leading an army

Attire: Royal attire, armor for battle, fine clothing

Wearing his crown askew after imprisonment

Courageous, somewhat restless, grateful

Image Prompt & Upload
A regal middle-aged king with a strong jawline and kind yet authoritative expression, wearing a magnificent royal purple robe trimmed with gold embroidery and a white fur-lined collar, a gleaming golden crown adorned with rubies and sapphires atop his wavy brown hair with distinguished grey streaks, tall polished leather boots, standing upright with confident noble posture, one hand resting on a jeweled scepter, the other hand raised in a gesture of leadership, broad shoulders, trimmed beard, warm determined eyes, rich crimson cape draped over his shoulders

Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature

The Queen ★ protagonist

human adult female

Beautiful, resourceful, disguised as a young boy

Attire: Boy's clothes, lute player's attire, royal gown

Chopped-off brown hair tucked under a cap, holding a lute

Intelligent, loyal, brave

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A regal woman in her mid-30s with striking high cheekbones, piercing green eyes, and a determined expression. She has long flowing auburn hair adorned with a delicate golden crown encrusted with emeralds. She wears an elegant deep crimson velvet gown with intricate gold embroidery along the bodice and sleeves, a flowing cape draped over one shoulder, and a jeweled pendant necklace. She stands tall with confident posture, one hand resting on a gleaming sword at her hip, the other holding a rolled parchment. Her demeanor is both graceful and fierce, embodying strength and compassion. Subtle scars on her hands hint at battles fought. She wears leather boots beneath her gown and a silver signet ring on her finger. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature

The Heathen King ⚔ antagonist

human adult male

Powerful, cruel, easily swayed by music

Attire: Rich, barbaric clothing, possibly with jewels and furs

Sitting on his throne, captivated by the lute player

Cruel, easily charmed, somewhat naive

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A middle-aged king with a cruel, sharp-featured face, a thick black beard streaked with grey, and piercing, cold blue eyes. He wears heavy, blackened iron armor etched with savage, thorny patterns over dark leather. A crown of twisted, jagged black metal sits on his brow. He stands with a broad, imposing posture, one gauntleted hand resting on the pommel of a massive, notched sword planted on the ground before him. His expression is a cold, calculating smirk of authority. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
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Heathen King's Prison

indoor night

A dark prison where captives are chained at night and yoked to plough the land during the day.

Mood: desolate

The king is held captive and forced to work as a prisoner.

chains yokes ploughed fields prison walls
Image Prompt & Upload
A vast, oppressive stone prison courtyard under a sliver of cold moon, shrouded in deep night. Massive, weathered granite walls rise into darkness, topped with jagged iron spikes. Heavy, rusted chains and wooden yokes lie abandoned in the dirt, half-buried. The ground is scarred with deep, barren furrows from endless ploughing. A few guttering torches cast long, dancing shadows and a faint orange glow on the damp stone. In the distance, a single dead tree stands stark against the starless sky. The air feels heavy and still, with a palette of charcoal gray, cold stone blue, and muted rust. No border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Palace Courtyard

outdoor

The great court in front of the heathen king's palace, where the queen plays her lute.

Mood: hopeful

The queen uses her music to gain access to the king and his prison.

lute palace facade singing queen prison at the back
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Sunset bathes the grand palace courtyard in warm, golden light, casting long shadows from towering sandstone walls and ornate archways. Intricate blue and gold mosaic tiles adorn the floors and fountain basin at the center, where water gently trickles. Potted orange trees and hanging vines soften the stone architecture. A low, silk-draped divan and scattered cushions sit near the fountain, alongside a discarded lute, suggesting recent music. The sky is a gradient of deep orange and purple, with the first stars appearing. The atmosphere is serene, majestic, and slightly mysterious. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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King's Palace

indoor

The king's palace where he holds court and listens to the lute player.

Mood: opulent

The king is confronted by his wife disguised as the lute player.

throne council king lute player
Image Prompt & Upload
A grand palace throne room with high vaulted ceilings, ornate golden arches, and polished marble floors reflecting soft daylight from tall stained-glass windows. Rich tapestries in deep crimson and royal blue adorn the stone walls, depicting ancient hunts and legends. A majestic throne atop a carved dais sits at the far end, flanked by intricate stone columns. Sunlight streams through the windows, casting vibrant patterns across the floor and illuminating dust motes in the air. Through the arches, a glimpse of sunlit palace courtyards with trimmed hedges and blooming rose bushes is visible. The atmosphere is serene and regal, steeped in quiet majesty. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration