Brother and Sister
by Andrew Lang · from The Red Fairy Book
Adapted Version
Once, a brother and sister had a mean mom. They were not happy. The mean mom was not kind to them. So they ran away into the wide world.
They walked a long way. They went into a big forest. The mean mom was a witch. She put magic in all streams.
The brother was very thirsty. He wanted to drink from a stream. The sister heard magic in the water. She said, "Don't drink, brother!" He didn't. They found a new stream. The sister heard the magic again. She said, "Don't drink!" He didn't. They found a third stream. The brother was too thirsty. He drank from the water. He turned into a little deer.
The sister cried. The deer cried too. She said, "I will care for you." She put a ribbon on his neck. They found a little house in the forest. They lived there. The sister got food for them. They were happy close.
One day, the King hunted in the forest. The deer heard the sounds. He wanted to go to the hunt. The sister said, "You can go. But come back tonight. Knock and say, 'Sister dear, open the door. I am here.'" The deer went to the hunt.
A huntsman saw the pretty deer. He followed it to the little house. He told the King about it.
The next day, the deer went to the hunt again. The King followed the deer. He followed it to the little house. The deer knocked and said the rhyme. The door opened. The King went inside. He saw the sister. She was very kind and pretty. The King said, "Will you marry me and come to my castle?" The sister said, "Yes, if my deer can come too." The King said yes. They all went to the castle. They were very happy.
But the mean mom heard they were happy. She was very angry. She wanted to hurt the Queen. She had a daughter. She wanted her daughter to be Queen. So they made a plan.
One day, the King went hunting. The Queen had a new baby. The mean mom and her daughter tricked the Queen. They put a magic sleep on her. They put the daughter in the Queen's bed. They hid the sleeping Queen.
At night, the Queen came back like a dream. She went to see her baby and the deer. She said a little rhyme: "Is my baby well? Is my deer well? I will come two times, then say goodbye." She came for two nights.
The nurse saw the Queen. She told the King. The King watched the next night. The Queen came again. She said her rhyme. The King said, "You are my dear wife!" The Queen woke up. She told the King what the mean mom did.
The King was very angry. He punished the mean mom and her daughter. They were sent away. The magic spell broke. The deer turned back into a boy! He was the brother again.
The brother, sister, King, and baby were close. Love and home can beat bad things. And they were happy ever after.
Original Story
BROTHER AND SISTER
Brother took sister by the hand and said: ‘Look here; we haven’t had
one single happy hour since our mother died. That stepmother of ours
beats us regularly every day, and if we dare go near her she kicks us
away. We never get anything but hard dry crusts to eat—why, the dog
under the table is better off than we are. She does throw him a good
morsel or two now and then. Oh dear! if our own dear mother only knew
all about it! Come along, and let us go forth into the wide world
together.’
So off they started through fields and meadows, over hedges and
ditches, and walked the whole day long, and when it rained sister said:
‘Heaven and our hearts are weeping together.’
Towards evening they came to a large forest, and were so tired out with
hunger and their long walk, as well as all their trouble, that they
crept into a hollow tree and soon fell fast asleep.
Next morning, when they woke up, the sun was already high in the
heavens and was shining down bright and warm into the tree. Then said
brother:
‘I’m so thirsty, sister; if I did but know where to find a little
stream, I’d go and have a drink. I do believe I hear one.’ He jumped
up, took sister by the hand, and they set off to hunt for the brook.
Now their cruel stepmother was in reality a witch, and she knew
perfectly well that the two children had run away. She had crept
secretly after them, and had cast her spells over all the streams in
the forest.
Presently the children found a little brook dancing and glittering over
the stones, and brother was eager to drink of it, but as it rushed past
sister heard it murmuring:
‘Who drinks of me will be a tiger! who drinks of me will be a tiger!’
So she cried out, ‘Oh! dear brother, pray don’t drink, or you’ll be
turned into a wild beast and tear me to pieces.’
Brother was dreadfully thirsty, but he did not drink.
‘Very well,’ said he, ‘I’ll wait till we come to the next spring.’
When they came to the second brook, sister heard it repeating too:
‘Who drinks of me will be a wolf! who drinks of me will be a wolf!’
And she cried, ‘Oh! brother, pray don’t drink here either, or you’ll be
turned into a wolf and eat me up.’
Again brother did not drink, but he said:
‘Well, I’ll wait a little longer till we reach the next stream, but
then, whatever you may say, I really must drink, for I can bear this
thirst no longer.’
And when they got to the third brook, sister heard it say as it rushed
past:
‘Who drinks of me will be a roe! who drinks of me will be a roe!’
And she begged, ‘Ah! brother, don’t drink yet, or you’ll become a roe
and run away from me.’
But her brother was already kneeling by the brook and bending over it
to drink, and, sure enough, no sooner had his lips touched the water
than he fell on the grass transformed into a little Roebuck.
Sister cried bitterly over her poor bewitched brother, and the little
Roe wept too, and sat sadly by her side. At last the girl said:
‘Never mind, dear little fawn, I will never forsake you,’ and she took
off her golden garter and tied it round the Roe’s neck.
Then she plucked rushes and plaited a soft cord of them, which she
fastened to the collar. When she had done this she led the Roe farther
and farther, right into the depths of the forest.
After they had gone a long, long way they came to a little house, and
when the girl looked into it she found it was quite empty, and she
thought ‘perhaps we might stay and live here.’
So she hunted up leaves and moss to make a soft bed for the little Roe,
and every morning and evening she went out and gathered roots, nuts,
and berries for herself, and tender young grass for the fawn. And he
fed from her hand, and played round her and seemed quite happy. In the
evening, when sister was tired, she said her prayers and then laid her
head on the fawn’s back and fell sound asleep with it as a pillow. And
if brother had but kept his natural form, really it would have been a
most delightful kind of life.
They had been living for some time in the forest in this way, when it
came to pass that the King of that country had a great hunt through the
woods. Then the whole forest rang with such a blowing of horns, baying
of dogs, and joyful cries of huntsmen, that the little Roe heard it and
longed to join in too.
‘Ah!’ said he to sister, ‘do let me go off to the hunt! I can’t keep
still any longer.’
And he begged and prayed till at last she consented.
‘But,’ said she, ‘mind you come back in the evening. I shall lock my
door fast for fear of those wild huntsmen; so, to make sure of my
knowing you, knock at the door and say, “My sister dear, open; I’m
here.” If you don’t speak I shan’t open the door.’
So off sprang the little Roe, and he felt quite well and happy in the
free open air.
The King and his huntsmen soon saw the beautiful creature and started
in pursuit, but they could not come up with it, and whenever they
thought they were sure to catch it, it bounded off to one side into the
bushes and disappeared. When night came on it ran home, and knocking at
the door of the little house cried:
‘My sister dear, open; I’m here.’ The door opened, and he ran in and
rested all night on his soft mossy bed.
Next morning the hunt began again, and as soon as the little Roe heard
the horns and the ‘Ho! ho!’ of the huntsmen, he could not rest another
moment, and said:
‘Sister, open the door, I must get out.’
So sister opened the door and said, ‘Now mind and get back by
nightfall, and say your little rhyme.’
As soon as the King and his huntsmen saw the Roe with the golden collar
they all rode off after it, but it was far too quick and nimble for
them. This went on all day, but as evening came on the huntsmen had
gradually encircled the Roe, and one of them wounded it slightly in the
foot, so that it limped and ran off slowly.
Then the huntsman stole after it as far as the little house, and heard
it call out, ‘My sister dear, open; I’m here,’ and he saw the door open
and close immediately the fawn had run in.
The huntsman remembered all this carefully, and went off straight to
the King and told him all he had seen and heard.
‘To-morrow we will hunt again,’ said the King.
Poor sister was terribly frightened when she saw how her little Fawn
had been wounded. She washed off the blood, bound up the injured foot
with herbs, and said: ‘Now, dear, go and lie down and rest, so that
your wound may heal.’
The wound was really so slight that it was quite well next day, and the
little Roe did not feel it at all. No sooner did it hear the sounds of
hunting in the forest than it cried:
‘I can’t stand this, I must be there too; I’ll take care they shan’t
catch me.’
Sister began to cry, and said, ‘They are certain to kill you, and then
I shall be left all alone in the forest and forsaken by everyone. I
can’t and won’t let you out.’
‘Then I shall die of grief,’ replied the Roe, ‘for when I hear that
horn I feel as if I must jump right out of my skin.’
So at last, when sister found there was nothing else to be done, she
opened the door with a heavy heart, and the Roe darted forth full of
glee and health into the forest.
As soon as the King saw the Roe, he said to his huntsman, ‘Now then,
give chase to it all day till evening, but mind and be careful not to
hurt it.’
When the sun had set the King said to his huntsman, ‘Now come and show
me the little house in the wood.’
And when he got to the house he knocked at the door and said, ‘My
sister dear, open; I’m here.’ Then the door opened and the King walked
in, and there stood the loveliest maiden he had ever seen.
The girl was much startled when instead of the little Roe she expected
she saw a man with a gold crown on his head walk in. But the King
looked kindly at her, held out his hand, and said, ‘Will you come with
me to my castle and be my dear wife?’
‘Oh yes!’ replied the maiden, ‘but you must let my Roe come too. I
could not possibly forsake it.’
‘It shall stay with you as long as you live, and shall want for
nothing,’ the King promised.
In the meantime the Roe came bounding in, and sister tied the rush cord
once more to its collar, took the end in her hand, and so they left the
little house in the forest together.
The King lifted the lonely maiden on to his horse, and led her to his
castle, where the wedding was celebrated with the greatest splendour.
The Roe was petted and caressed, and ran about at will in the palace
gardens.
Now all this time the wicked stepmother, who had been the cause of
these poor children’s misfortunes and trying adventures, was feeling
fully persuaded that sister had been torn to pieces by wild beasts, and
brother shot to death in the shape of a Roe. When she heard how happy
and prosperous they were, her heart was filled with envy and hatred,
and she could think of nothing but how to bring some fresh misfortune
on them. Her own daughter, who was as hideous as night and had only one
eye, reproached her by saying, ‘It is I who ought to have had this good
luck and been Queen.’
‘Be quiet, will you,’ said the old woman; ‘when the time comes I shall
be at hand.’
Now after some time it happened one day when the King was out hunting
that the Queen gave birth to a beautiful little boy. The old witch
thought here was a good chance for her; so she took the form of the
lady in waiting, and, hurrying into the room where the Queen lay in her
bed, called out, ‘The bath is quite ready; it will help to make you
strong again. Come, let us be quick, for fear the water should get
cold.’ Her daughter was at hand, too, and between them they carried the
Queen, who was still very weak, into the bath-room and laid her in the
bath; then they locked the door and ran away.
They took care beforehand to make a blazing hot fire under the bath, so
that the lovely young Queen might be suffocated.
As soon as they were sure this was the case, the old witch tied a cap
on her daughter’s head and laid her in the Queen’s bed. She managed,
too, to make her figure and general appearance look like the Queen’s,
but even her power could not restore the eye she had lost; so she made
her lie on the side of the missing eye, in order to prevent the King’s
noticing anything.
In the evening, when the King came home and heard the news of his son’s
birth, he was full of delight, and insisted on going at once to his
dear wife’s bedside to see how she was getting on. But the old witch
cried out, ‘Take care and keep the curtains drawn; don’t let the light
get into the Queen’s eyes; she must be kept perfectly quiet.’ So the
King went away and never knew that it was a false Queen who lay in the
bed.
When midnight came and everyone in the palace was sound asleep, the
nurse who alone watched by the baby’s cradle in the nursery saw the
door open gently, and who should come in but the real Queen. She lifted
the child from its cradle, laid it on her arm, and nursed it for some
time. Then she carefully shook up the pillows of the little bed, laid
the baby down and tucked the coverlet in all round him. She did not
forget the little Roe either, but went to the corner where it lay, and
gently stroked its back. Then she silently left the room, and next
morning when the nurse asked the sentries if they had seen any one go
into the castle that night, they all said, ‘No, we saw no one at all.’
For many nights the Queen came in the same way, but she never spoke a
word, and the nurse was too frightened to say anything about her
visits.
After some little time had elapsed the Queen spoke one night, and said:
‘Is my child well? Is my Roe well?
I’ll come back twice and then farewell.’
The nurse made no answer, but as soon as the Queen had disappeared she
went to the King and told him all. The King exclaimed, ‘Good heavens!
what do you say? I will watch myself to-night by the child’s bed.’
When the evening came he went to the nursery, and at midnight the Queen
appeared and said:
‘Is my child well? Is my Roe well?
I’ll come back once and then farewell.’
And she nursed and petted the child as usual before she disappeared.
The King dared not trust himself to speak to her, but the following
night he kept watch again.
That night when the Queen came she said:
‘Is my child well? Is my Roe well?
I’ve come this once, and now farewell.’
Then the King could restrain himself no longer, but sprang to her side
and cried, ‘You can be no one but my dear wife!’
‘Yes,’ said she, ‘I am your dear wife!’ and in the same moment she was
restored to life, and was as fresh and well and rosy as ever. Then she
told the King all the cruel things the wicked witch and her daughter
had done. The King had them both arrested at once and brought to trial,
and they were condemned to death. The daughter was led into the forest,
where the wild beasts tore her to pieces, and the old witch was burnt
at the stake.
As soon as she reduced to ashes the spell was taken off the little Roe,
and he was restored to his natural shape once more, and so brother and
sister lived happily ever after.[6]
[6] Grimm.
Story DNA
Moral
True love and loyalty can overcome even the darkest magic and adversity.
Plot Summary
Abused by their wicked stepmother, a brother and sister flee into the forest. The stepmother, a witch, enchants the streams, and the brother is transformed into a roebuck after drinking from the third. The sister devotedly cares for him, and they find a secluded home. A King discovers the maiden and marries her, bringing the roebuck to his castle. Enraged, the stepmother attempts to murder the Queen and replaces her with her own daughter. The Queen, now a ghostly figure, secretly visits her child and the roebuck, until the King discovers her, exposes the witch's plot, and restores his family, breaking the spell on the brother.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is a variant of 'Brother and Sister' (KHM 11) collected by the Brothers Grimm, reflecting common European folklore motifs of abused children, magical transformations, and wicked stepmothers.
Plot Beats (15)
- Brother and sister, abused by their stepmother, decide to run away from home.
- They wander into a forest, where the stepmother (a witch) has enchanted all the streams.
- The sister warns her brother against drinking from the first two streams (tiger, wolf), but he drinks from the third and turns into a roebuck.
- The sister vows to care for her roebuck brother, and they find an abandoned house in the forest.
- The King's hunt passes through the forest, and the roebuck is irresistibly drawn to it.
- The roebuck is wounded by a huntsman, who follows it to the sister's house and reports back to the King.
- The King, intrigued, follows the roebuck's call to the house, finds the beautiful maiden, and proposes marriage.
- The sister agrees to marry the King, bringing her roebuck brother to the castle, and they live happily.
- The wicked stepmother, enraged by their happiness, plots to kill the Queen and replace her with her one-eyed daughter.
- While the King is hunting, the witch and her daughter trick the Queen into a scalding bath, then replace her with the daughter.
- The Queen, now a ghost, visits her baby and the roebuck at midnight for two nights, speaking a rhyme.
- The nurse tells the King, who watches on the third night and hears the Queen's rhyme.
- The King confronts the Queen, who is restored to life and reveals the stepmother's crimes.
- The witch and her daughter are executed, breaking the spell on the brother, who returns to human form.
- Brother, sister, King, and child live happily ever after.
Characters
Brother ★ protagonist
Not explicitly described, but likely thin and pale due to mistreatment.
Attire: Simple peasant clothing, likely patched and worn.
Thirsty, initially impatient, ultimately loving and loyal to his sister.
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A young man in his early twenties with a determined expression and messy brown hair. He wears a simple green tunic over brown trousers and sturdy leather boots, with a small leather satchel slung across his chest. His posture is upright and confident, standing with one hand resting on his hip. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Sister ★ protagonist
Not explicitly described, but likely thin and pale due to mistreatment.
Attire: Simple peasant clothing, likely patched and worn.
Protective, cautious, resourceful, and deeply loving.
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A young woman in her early twenties with gentle hazel eyes and a warm, hopeful expression. She has long chestnut brown hair loosely braided over one shoulder with small wildflowers woven through it. She wears a simple but charming fitted bodice in soft dusty blue with cream lace trim, paired with a flowing earth-toned skirt that reaches her ankles. A worn leather satchel hangs across her body. Her posture is upright and determined, standing with one hand resting lightly on a wooden walking stick. She wears simple brown leather boots peeking beneath her skirt. Her skin is fair with a light dusting of freckles across her nose. The overall impression is of a kind-hearted, brave young woman ready for an adventure. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature
Stepmother ⚔ antagonist
Implied to be physically unremarkable until she transforms.
Attire: Normal clothing to disguise herself, later a lady-in-waiting's gown.
Cruel, envious, and power-hungry.
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A middle-aged woman with sharp, angular features and a cold, calculating expression. She has pale skin, high cheekbones, and dark, piercing eyes lined with subtle kohl. Her raven-black hair is pulled back into a severe, tight bun. She wears an elegant, high-collared gown of deep burgundy velvet with black lace trim at the cuffs and neckline. Her posture is rigid and upright, standing tall with one hand resting dismissively on her hip and the other holding a single, perfect red rose, its stem thorned. She looks down her nose with a faint, cruel smirk. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
King ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but assumed to be handsome and strong.
Attire: Hunting clothes, later royal garments and a gold crown.
Kind, just, and easily deceived initially.
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A middle-aged male monarch with a short, neatly trimmed gray beard and kind, wise eyes. He wears a heavy golden crown adorned with red gemstones and a rich, deep blue velvet robe trimmed with white ermine fur, over a white tunic with gold embroidery. He stands tall with a regal, benevolent posture, one hand resting on the pommel of a ceremonial sword at his hip. He is in a grand stone throne room with tall arched windows. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Daughter ⚔ antagonist
Hideous, with only one eye.
Attire: Queen's gown (imitation).
Envious, resentful, and complicit in her mother's evil.
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A young woman in her early twenties with sharp, pale features and cold, calculating eyes. Her raven-black hair is styled in an intricate, severe updo. She wears a floor-length gown of deep plum velvet with embroidered silver thorns climbing the bodice and sleeves. Her posture is rigid and authoritative, one hand resting on a twisted blackthorn staff. Her expression is one of cold, confident disdain, a faint, cruel smile on her lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Hollow Tree in the Forest
A large tree with a hollow inside, providing shelter for the children.
Mood: desolate, tired, temporary
The children find refuge and sleep after fleeing their stepmother.
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A colossal, ancient oak tree dominates the heart of a sun-dappled, enchanted forest. Its gnarled, moss-covered trunk splits open into a vast, arched hollow, creating a natural doorway. Inside, the hollow is spacious and dry, with smooth, worn wooden walls. Thick, emerald moss carpets the ground around the entrance, and delicate ferns unfurl at its base. The surrounding forest is lush and verdant, with towering trees draped in ivy and rays of golden afternoon light piercing through the canopy, illuminating floating dust motes and creating a warm, magical glow. The atmosphere is serene, quiet, and deeply sheltered, a perfect secret refuge within the ancient woods. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Little House in the Depths of the Forest
A small, empty house deep within the forest, furnished with leaves and moss.
Mood: peaceful, isolated, self-sufficient
The sister and roe-brother establish a home and live in relative peace.
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A small, abandoned cottage sits in a sun-dappled clearing of an ancient, moss-draped forest at dawn. The wooden structure is weathered and partially reclaimed by nature, with a roof thickly covered in green moss and walls woven with creeping ivy. Soft golden morning light filters through the towering canopy of oak and pine, casting long, gentle shadows and illuminating floating dust motes. The forest floor is a lush carpet of ferns, fallen leaves, and clusters of wild mushrooms. A faint mist clings to the ground. The color palette is rich with deep greens, earthy browns, and soft golden highlights. The atmosphere is serene, quiet, and deeply magical. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
King's Castle
A grand castle where the wedding is celebrated and the Queen gives birth.
Mood: opulent, deceptive, dangerous
The Queen is replaced by the witch's daughter, leading to a period of deception and peril.
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A grand castle at twilight, bathed in the warm glow of countless lit lanterns and candles in tall windows. Soaring spires with fluttering celebratory banners in royal blue and gold. A sweeping marble staircase leads to massive open gates, hinting at festivities within. Lush, manicured gardens with blooming white roses and flowing fountains surround the base. The sky transitions from deep blue to soft purple, with the first stars appearing. A serene, magical atmosphere of joy and new beginnings. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Forest Streams
Three glittering brooks dancing over stones.
Mood: enchanted, dangerous
The brother is transformed into a roe after drinking from the bewitched stream.
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A sun-dappled ancient forest at golden hour, morning mist clinging to the fern-covered floor. Three crystal-clear brooks weave between mossy, ancient stones, their surfaces glittering with captured sunlight. Sunbeams pierce the dense emerald canopy, illuminating the swirling water and highlighting the vibrant green moss on the banks. The air feels cool and fresh, filled with the soft sound of trickling water. Rich earthy browns, deep greens, and sparkling silver dominate the scene. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.