The White Dove
by Andrew Lang · from The Pink Fairy Book
Adapted Version
Two princes sailed on a boat. A big storm came. The wind blew hard. The waves were big. The princes were scared. They held the boat tight.
An old Witch came in a dough-trough. "I can help you," she said. "Promise me a favor." The princes were scared. They said, "Yes, we promise!" The storm stopped. The boat went to shore.
Many years passed. A big storm came again. The Witch came to the palace. "Come with me," she said to the Prince. "Your brothers promised." The Prince was brave. He said, "Okay. I will go."
The Witch gave the Prince a big job. "Sort these feathers," she said. "Finish before I come home." Many feathers. The Prince worked hard. It was too much.
A white Dove tapped the window. "Let me in," she cooed. The Prince opened the window. The Dove helped him. As one, they sorted the feathers fast.
The Witch said, "Split this wood." The pile was big. The Prince worked all day. The pile was still big.
The white Dove came back. "I will help you," she said. She split the wood with her beak. The Prince was happy. He thanked the Dove. He gave her a gentle kiss.
The Dove became a Princess! She was pretty. "The Witch made me a dove," she said. "Ask for me as your reward. Tie a red thread on my finger. So you can find me."
He tied a red thread on her finger. The Princess became a dove again. The Witch came home.
"You did good work," said the Witch. "Ask for a reward."
"I want the dove Princess," said the Prince.
"No!" said the Witch. "Want this donkey?" The Prince saw a red thread. "Yes," he said.
"Do you want this old woman?" The Prince saw the red thread. "Yes," he said.
The Witch was very angry. But she made a promise. The Prince and the Princess had a wedding.
"Do not drink stuff," the Princess whispered. "It is a sleeping drink."
At the party, the Prince almost drank. The Princess stopped him. The Witch was upset.
That night, the Princess said, "We must run away. Put two sticks in our bed. Take a pot and a cup of water."
They ran into the night. The Witch called to them. The sticks answered. The Witch thought they were in bed.
The sun came up. The Witch looked in the room. Only sticks were in the bed! She ran after them.
The Princess said, "Look behind us!"
"I see a dark cloud," said the Prince.
"Throw the pot!" said the Princess.
A big forest grew behind them. The Witch had to go get an axe.
Later, the Princess said, "Look again!"
"The cloud is back," said the Prince.
"Throw the water!" said the Princess.
A big lake appeared. The Witch had to go get her dough-trough.
The Prince and Princess reached the castle. They climbed through a window. The Witch was right behind them!
The Princess blew a kiss. Many white doves flew out. They flew around the Witch. The Witch turned into a big stone. She could not hurt anyone.
The Prince and Princess were safe. They were happy. Being loyal and clever helps you beat bad things. They got married and lived with joy. The end.
Original Story
The White Dove
From the Danish.
A king had two sons. They were a pair of reckless fellows, who always
had something foolish to do. One day they rowed out alone on the sea in
a little boat. It was beautiful weather when they set out, but as soon
as they had got some distance from the shore there arose a terrific
storm. The oars went overboard at once, and the little boat was tossed
about on the rolling billows like a nut-shell. The princes had to hold
fast by the seats to keep from being thrown out of the boat.
In the midst of all this they met a wonderful vessel--it was a
dough-trough, in which there sat an old woman. She called to them, and
said that they could still get to shore alive if they would promise her
the son that was next to come to their mother the queen.
‘We can’t do that,’ shouted the princes; ‘he doesn’t belong to us so we
can’t give him away.’
‘Then you can rot at the bottom of the sea, both of you,’ said the old
woman; ‘and perhaps it may be the case that your mother would rather
keep the two sons she has than the one she hasn’t got yet.’
Then she rowed away in her dough-trough, while the storm howled still
louder than before, and the water dashed over their boat until it was
almost sinking. Then the princes thought that there was something in
what the old woman had said about their mother, and being, of course,
eager to save their lives, they shouted to her, and promised that she
should have their brother if she would deliver them from this danger. As
soon as they had done so the storm ceased and the waves fell. The boat
drove ashore below their father’s castle, and both princes were received
with open arms by their father and mother, who had suffered great
anxiety for them.
The two brothers said nothing about what they had promised, neither at
that time nor later on when the queen’s third son came, a beautiful boy,
whom she loved more than anything else in the world. He was brought up
and educated in his father’s house until he was full grown, and still
his brothers had never seen or heard anything about the witch to whom
they had promised him before he was born.
It happened one evening that there arose a raging storm, with mist and
darkness. It howled and roared around the king’s palace, and in the
midst of it there came a loud knock on the door of the hall where the
youngest prince was. He went to the door and found there an old woman
with a dough- trough on her back, who said to him that he must go with
her at once; his brothers had promised him to her if she would save
their lives.
‘Yes,’ said he; ‘if you saved my brothers’ lives, and they promised me
to you, then I will go with you.’
They therefore went down to the beach together, where he had to take his
seat in the trough, along with the witch, who sailed away with him, over
the sea, home to her dwelling.
The prince was now in the witch’s power, and in her service. The first
thing she set him to was to pick feathers. ‘The heap of feathers that
you see here,’ said she, ‘you must get finished before I come home in
the evening, otherwise you shall be set to harder work.’ He started
to the feathers, and picked and picked until there was only a single
feather left that had not passed through his hands. But then there came
a whirlwind and sent all the feathers flying, and swept them along the
floor into a heap, where they lay as if they were trampled together.
He had now to begin all his work over again, but by this time it only
wanted an hour of evening, when the witch was to be expected home, and
he easily saw that it was impossible for him to be finished by that
time.
Then he heard something tapping at the window pane, and a thin voice
said, ‘Let me in, and I will help you.’ It was a white dove, which sat
outside the window, and was pecking at it with its beak. He opened the
window, and the dove came in and set to work at once, and picked all
the feathers out of the heap with its beak. Before the hour was past the
feathers were all nicely arranged: the dove flew out at the window, and
at, the same moment the witch came in at the door.
‘Well, well,’ said she, ‘it was more than I would have expected of you
to get all the feathers put in order so nicely. However, such a prince
might be expected to have neat fingers.’
Next morning the witch said to the prince, ‘To-day you shall have some
easy work to do. Outside the door I have some firewood lying; you must
split that for me into little bits that I can kindle the fire with. That
will soon be done, but you must be finished before I come home.’
The prince got a little axe and set to work at once. He split and clove
away, and thought that he was getting on fast; but the day wore on until
it was long past midday, and he was still very far from having finished.
He thought, in fact, that the pile of wood rather grew bigger than
smaller, in spite of what he took off it; so he let his hands fall by
his side, and dried the sweat from his forehead, and was ill at ease,
for he knew that it would be bad for him if he was not finished with the
work before the witch came home.
Then the white dove came flying and settled down on the pile of wood,
and cooed and said, ‘Shall I help you?’
‘Yes,’ said the prince, ‘many thanks for your help yesterday, and for
what you offer to-day.’ Thereupon the little dove seized one piece of
wood after another and split it with its beak. The prince could not take
away the wood as quickly as the dove could split it, and in a short time
it was all cleft into little sticks.
The dove then flew up on his shoulder and sat there and the prince
thanked it, and stroked and caressed its white feathers, and kissed
its little red beak. With that it was a dove no longer, but a beautiful
young maiden, who stood by his side. She told him then that she was a
princess whom the witch had stolen, and had changed to this shape,
but with his kiss she had got her human form again; and if he would be
faithful to her, and take her to wife, she could free them both from the
witch’s power.
The prince was quite captivated by the beautiful princess, and was quite
willing to do anything whatsoever to get her for himself.
She then said to him, ‘When the witch comes home you must ask her to
grant you a wish, when you have accomplished so well all that she has
demanded of you. When she agrees to this you must ask her straight out
for the princess that she has flying about as a white dove. But just now
you must take a red silk thread and tie it round my little finger, so
that you may be able to recognise me again, into whatever shape she
turns me.’
The prince made haste to get the silk thread tied round her little white
finger; at the same moment the princess became a dove again and flew
away, and immediately after that the old witch came home with her
dough-trough on he back.
‘Well,’ said she, ‘I must say that you are clever at your work, and it
is something, too, that such princely hands are not accustomed to.’
‘Since you are so well pleased with my work, said the prince, ‘you
will, no doubt, be willing to give me a little pleasure too, and give me
something that I have taken a fancy to.’
‘Oh yes, indeed,’ said the old woman; ‘what is it that you want?’
‘I want the princess here who is in the shape of a white dove,’ said the
prince.
‘What nonsense!’ said the witch. ‘Why should you imagine that there are
princesses here flying about in the shape of white doves? But if you
will have a princess, you can get one such as we have them.’ She then
came to him, dragging a shaggy little grey ass with long ears. ‘Will you
have this?’ said she; ‘you can’t get any other princess!’
The prince used his eyes and saw the red silk thread on one of the ass’s
hoofs, so he said, ‘Yes, just let me have it.’
‘What will you do with it?’ asked the witch.
‘I will ride on it,’ said the prince; but with that the witch dragged
it away again, and came back with an old, wrinkled, toothless hag, whose
hands trembled with age. ‘You can have no other princess,’ said she.
‘Will you have her?’
‘Yes, I will,’ said the prince, for he saw the red silk thread on the
old woman’s finger.
At this the witch became so furious that she danced about and knocked
everything to pieces that she could lay her hands upon, so that the
splinters flew about the ears of the prince and princess, who now stood
there in her own beautiful shape.
Then their marriage had to be celebrated, for the witch had to stick
to what she had promised, and he must get the princess whatever might
happen afterwards.
The princess now said to him, ‘At the marriage feast you may eat what
you please, but you must not drink anything whatever, for if you do that
you will forget me.’
This, however, the prince forgot on the wedding day, and stretched out
his hand and took a cup of wine; but the princess was keeping watch over
him, and gave him a push with her elbow, so that the wine flew over the
table- cloth.
Then the witch got up and laid about her among the plates and dishes, so
that the pieces flew about their ears, just as she had done when she was
cheated the first time.
They were then taken to the bridal chamber, and the door was shut. Then
the princess said, ‘Now the witch has kept her promise, but she will do
no more if she can help it, so we must fly immediately. I shall lay two
pieces of wood in the bed to answer for us when the witch speaks to us.
You can take the flower-pot and the glass of water that stands in the
window, and we must slip out by that and get away.’
No sooner said than done. They hurried off out into the dark night, the
princess leading, because she knew the way, having spied it out while
she flew about as a dove.
At midnight the witch came to the door of the room and called in to
them, and the two pieces of wood answered her, so that she believed they
were there, and went away again. Before daybreak she was at the door
again and called to them, and again the pieces of wood answered for
them. She thus thought that she had them, and when the sun rose the
bridal night was past: she had then kept her promise, and could vent her
anger and revenge on both of them. With the first sunbeam she broke into
the room, but there she found no prince and no princess--nothing but the
two pieces of firewood, which lay in the bed, and stared, and spoke not
a word. These she threw on the floor, so that they were splintered into
a thousand pieces, and off she hastened after the fugitives.
With the first sunbeam the princess said to the prince, ‘Look round; do
you see anything behind us?’
‘Yes, I see a dark cloud, far away,’ said he.
‘Then throw the flower-pot over your head,’ said she. When this was done
there was a large thick forest behind them.
When the witch came to the forest she could not get through it until she
went home and brought her axe to cut a path.
A little after this the princess said again to the prince, ‘Look round;
do you see anything behind us?’
‘Yes,’ said the prince, ‘the big black cloud is there again.’
‘Then throw the glass of water over your head,’ said she.
When he had done this there was a great lake behind them, and this
the witch could not cross until she ran home again and brought her
dough-trough.
Meanwhile the fugitives had reached the castle which was the prince’s
home. They climbed over the garden wall, ran across the garden, and
crept in at an open window. By this time the witch was just at their
heels, but the princess stood in the window and blew upon the witch;
hundreds of white doves flew out of her mouth, fluttered and flapped
around the witch’s head until she grew so angry that she turned into
flint, and there she stands to this day, in the shape of a large flint
stone, outside the window.
Within the castle there was great rejoicing over the prince and his
bride. His two elder brothers came and knelt before him and confessed
what they had done, and said that he alone should inherit the kingdom,
and they would always be his faithful subjects.
Story DNA
Moral
Promises made under duress can have long-lasting consequences, but loyalty and cleverness can overcome even the most formidable evil.
Plot Summary
Two reckless princes promise their unborn brother to a witch to save themselves from a storm. Years later, the youngest prince is taken by the witch and forced into impossible tasks. A white dove, a cursed princess, helps him and reveals her true form. Together, they outwit the witch, escape her clutches using magical objects, and are pursued. The princess ultimately defeats the witch by transforming her into a stone, allowing the prince and princess to return to his kingdom and live happily ever after, with his repentant brothers acknowledging his rightful place.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Fairy tales often reflect societal anxieties and moral lessons, here dealing with promises, loyalty, and overcoming evil figures.
Plot Beats (16)
- Two reckless princes are caught in a violent sea storm.
- A witch in a dough-trough offers to save them if they promise her their unborn brother; they initially refuse but eventually agree.
- Years later, the youngest prince is taken by the witch during a storm, fulfilling his brothers' promise.
- The witch assigns the prince an impossible task: sorting a huge pile of feathers before evening.
- A white dove taps at the window, offers help, and sorts the feathers for the prince.
- The next day, the witch assigns another impossible task: splitting a huge pile of firewood into kindling.
- The white dove returns, helps the prince split the wood, and then transforms into a beautiful princess after the prince kisses her.
- The princess reveals she was cursed by the witch and instructs the prince to ask for her as his reward, marking her with a red silk thread.
- The witch tries to trick the prince by offering a donkey and an old hag, but the prince identifies the princess by the red thread.
- The witch, furious but bound by her promise, allows the marriage, but the princess warns the prince not to drink at the feast.
- The prince nearly drinks, but the princess stops him, causing the witch to rage again.
- The princess instructs the prince to place two pieces of wood in their bed and escape with a flower-pot and a glass of water.
- The witch is fooled by the wood, allowing the couple to escape, and then pursues them.
- The princess uses the flower-pot to create a forest and the glass of water to create a lake, delaying the witch.
- Upon reaching the prince's castle, the princess blows hundreds of white doves from her mouth, transforming the witch into a flint stone.
- The prince's brothers confess their past actions and declare him the rightful heir, and the prince and princess celebrate their union.
Characters
Youngest Prince ★ protagonist
Handsome, brave
Attire: Princely attire, tunic, hose, possibly a simple cloak
Honorable, obedient, easily trusting
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A young man in his late teens with a kind, determined expression and bright, curious eyes. He has tousled, chestnut brown hair and a lean, athletic build. He wears a simple yet well-made forest green tunic with leather trim, dark brown trousers, and sturdy leather boots. A small, worn leather satchel is slung over his shoulder. He stands tall in a confident, ready posture, one hand resting lightly on the hilt of a simple sword at his belt. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Princess (White Dove) ★ protagonist
Beautiful, transformed into a white dove
Attire: As a dove: pure white feathers. As a princess: elegant gown
Resourceful, clever, loyal
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A young woman in her late teens with a gentle, kind expression and soft, radiant skin. She has long, flowing silver-white hair adorned with tiny white feathers woven into delicate braids. She wears a graceful, floor-length gown of layered white silk that shimmers like moonlight, with subtle embroidery of dove wings along the sleeves and hem. Her posture is poised and serene, standing with one hand lightly touching her heart and the other extended slightly forward as if offering peace. She has an ethereal, luminous quality about her. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Witch ⚔ antagonist
Old, wrinkled, carries a dough-trough
Attire: Ragged, dark clothing, always with her dough-trough
Deceptive, cruel, easily angered
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An elderly woman with a hunched posture and a malicious grin, her face lined with deep wrinkles and a prominent hooked nose. She has a single wart on her chin and wild, tangled grey hair escaping a pointed black hat. She wears a long, tattered black robe with a high collar, adorned with strange, faded symbols. Her bony fingers clutch a gnarled wooden staff topped with a glowing, smoky orb. She leans forward slightly, her eyes gleaming with cruel intelligence. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Eldest Prince ◆ supporting
Reckless
Attire: Princely attire, tunic, hose, possibly a simple cloak
Foolish, selfish, remorseful
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A young man in his early twenties with a kind and attentive expression, standing in a relaxed yet upright posture. He has short, neatly combed chestnut brown hair and warm hazel eyes. He is dressed in a tailored doublet of deep forest green velvet with subtle gold embroidery at the collar and cuffs, paired with fitted dark brown trousers and polished leather boots. His hands are clasped gently behind his back. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Second Prince ◆ supporting
Reckless
Attire: Princely attire, tunic, hose, possibly a simple cloak
Foolish, selfish, remorseful
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A young man in his early twenties with short, neatly combed brown hair and calm, observant brown eyes. He wears a royal blue tunic with intricate silver embroidery, dark trousers, and polished leather boots. A simple grey cloak drapes over his shoulders. His posture is upright and confident, standing with one hand resting on the hilt of a sheathed sword at his side. He has a slight, reassuring smile on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature
Locations
Stormy Sea
Rolling billows, tossing a small boat like a nutshell, dark and dangerous.
Mood: Perilous, chaotic, life-threatening
The princes make a deal with the witch to save their lives.
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A tempestuous night at sea, towering waves of deep indigo and churning foam crash against a tiny weathered wooden boat, tossed violently in the turbulent water. The sky is a swirling mass of charcoal-grey clouds, illuminated by flashes of distant lightning that reveal the sheer scale of the storm. Rain slashes diagonally across the scene, and the ocean stretches endlessly under the oppressive, dramatic atmosphere. The color palette is dominated by dark blues, greys, and the stark white of breaking waves, creating a sense of immense power and peril. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Witch's Dwelling
A place where feathers need picking, firewood needs splitting, and magic is commonplace
Mood: Oppressive, enchanted, filled with impossible tasks
The prince performs impossible tasks with the help of the white dove and discovers the princess.
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At dawn, a crooked cottage sits in a misty forest clearing. Its walls are built of dark, gnarled wood, with a roof of thick moss and a chimney puffing purple smoke. Bundles of iridescent feathers hang from the eaves beside clusters of drying herbs. A well-used chopping block with a embedded axe stands near a stacked pile of split firewood. The surrounding forest is dense with twisted, ancient trees, their branches draped with glowing lanterns. Soft morning light filters through the canopy, illuminating floating motes of magical dust and patches of luminescent mushrooms on the ground. A narrow, bubbling brook winds past the dwelling. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Bridal Chamber
A room with a bed, a flower-pot, and a glass of water in the window.
Mood: Tense, secretive, a temporary refuge
The princess and prince escape from the witch by substituting themselves with firewood.
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Soft moonlight streams through an arched stone window, illuminating a cozy chamber. A canopy bed with deep velvet drapes and rumpled silk sheets dominates the space. On the windowsill, a terracotta pot overflows with luminous, silver-veined roses, their petals glowing faintly. Beside it, a crystal glass of water catches the moonlight, casting a delicate prismatic rainbow across the rough-hewn wooden floor. Dust motes dance in the beams of light. The atmosphere is one of serene, enchanted stillness. Colors are muted: deep blues, silvers, and rose pinks. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Forest
A large, thick forest that appears suddenly.
Mood: Obstructive, protective
The princess throws a flower pot over her head to create a large thick forest to slow the witch down.
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A twilight scene where a vast, ancient forest emerges abruptly from a misty meadow. Towering, gnarled oaks and pines form an impenetrable wall of deep emerald and shadowy teal, their branches intertwined like dark lace against a sky of dusky violet and peach. Ethereal light filters through the canopy in golden shafts, illuminating swirling fog and patches of glowing blue bioluminescent fungi on the forest floor. The meadow's tall, silvered grasses give way instantly to a carpet of moss, ferns, and twisted roots. Fireflies drift like tiny lanterns in the humid air. The atmosphere is mysterious and enchanting, with a sense of ancient magic and sudden transition. Rich, saturated colors, soft focus, fairy tale illustration style, no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Castle Window
An open window overlooking the garden, where the princess stands and blows doves at the witch.
Mood: Triumphant, final
The princess turns the witch into a flint stone.
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A medieval castle's arched stone window, slightly ajar, overlooking a sprawling twilight garden. The view is framed by rough-hewn gray stone walls, with trailing ivy creeping along the sill. Beyond, a manicured garden with trimmed hedges, blooming rose bushes in deep crimson and blush pink, and a distant marble fountain glinting in the fading light. The sky is a gradient of dusky lavender and soft peach, with the first stars beginning to appear. Soft, golden light from the setting sun casts long shadows across the garden path and illuminates floating white dove feathers drifting on a gentle breeze. The atmosphere is serene and magical, with a cool, misty evening air. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.