A Lost Paradise
by Andrew Lang · from The Lilac Fairy Book
Original Story
A LOST PARADISE
IN the middle of a great forest there lived a long time ago a
charcoal-burner and his wife. They were both young and handsome and
strong, and when they got married, they thought work would never fail
them. But bad times came, and they grew poorer and poorer, and the
nights in which they went hungry to bed became more and more frequent.
Now one evening the king of that country was hunting near the
charcoal-burner's hut. As he passed the door, he heard a sound of
sobbing, and being a good-natured man he stopped to listen, thinking
that perhaps he might be able to give some help.
'Were there ever two people so unhappy!' said a woman's voice. 'Here we
are, ready to work like slaves the whole day long, and no work can we
get. And it is all because of the curiosity of old mother Eve! If she
had only been like me, who never want to know anything, we should all
have been as happy as kings to-day, with plenty to eat, and warm
clothes to wear. Why----' but at this point a loud knock interrupted
her lamentations.
'Who is there?' asked she.
'I!' replied somebody.
'And who is "I"?'
'The king. Let me in.'
Full of surprise the woman jumped up and pulled the bar away from the
door. As the king entered, he noticed that there was no furniture in the
room at all, not even a chair, so he pretended to be in too great a
hurry to see anything around him, and only said, 'You must not let me
disturb you, I have no time to stay, but you seemed to be in trouble.
Tell me; are you very unhappy?'
'Oh, my lord, we can find no work and have eaten nothing for two days!'
answered she. 'Nothing remains for us but to die of hunger.'
'No, no, you shan't do that,' cried the king, 'or if you do, it will be
your own fault. You shall come with me into my palace, and you will feel
as if you were in Paradise, I promise you. In return, I only ask one
thing of you, that you shall obey my orders exactly.'
The charcoal-burner and his wife both stared at him for a moment, as if
they could hardly believe their ears; and, indeed, it was not to be
wondered at! Then they found their tongues, and exclaimed together:
'Oh, yes, yes, my lord! we will do everything you tell us. How could we
be so ungrateful as to disobey you, when you are so kind?'
The king smiled, and his eyes twinkled.
'Well, let us start at once,' said he. 'Lock your door, and put the key
in your pocket.'
The woman looked as if she thought this was needless, seeing it was
quite, quite certain they would never come back. But she dared not say
so, and did as the king told her.
* * * * *
After walking through the forest for a couple of miles, they all three
reached the palace, and by the king's orders servants led the
charcoal-burner and his wife into rooms filled with beautiful things
such as they had never even dreamed of. First they bathed in green
marble baths where the water looked like the sea, and then they put on
silken clothes that felt soft and pleasant. When they were ready, one of
the king's special servants entered, and took them into a small hall,
where dinner was laid, and this pleased them better than anything else.
They were just about to sit down to the table when the king walked in.
'I hope you have been attended to properly,' said he, 'and that you will
enjoy your dinner. My steward will take care you have all you want, and
I wish you to do exactly as you please. Oh, by the bye, there is one
thing! You notice that soup-tureen in the middle of the table? Well, be
careful on no account to lift the lid. If once you take off the cover,
there is an end of your good fortune.' Then bowing to his guests, he
left the room.
'Did you hear what he said?' inquired the charcoal-burner in an
awe-stricken voice. 'We are to have what we want, and do what we please.
Only we must not touch the soup-tureen.'
'No, of course we won't,' answered the wife. 'Why should we wish to? But
all the same it is rather odd, and one can't help wondering what is
inside.'
* * * * *
For many days life went on like a beautiful dream to the charcoal-burner
and his wife. Their beds were so comfortable, they could hardly make up
their minds to get up, their clothes were so lovely they could scarcely
bring themselves to take them off; their dinners were so good that they
found it very difficult to leave off eating. Then outside the palace
were gardens filled with rare flowers and fruits and singing birds, or
if they desired to go further, a golden coach, painted with wreaths of
forget-me-nots and lined with blue satin, awaited their orders.
Sometimes it happened that the king came to see them, and he smiled as
he glanced at the man, who was getting rosier and plumper each day. But
when his eyes rested on the woman, they took on a look which seemed to
say 'I knew it,' though this neither the charcoal-burner nor his wife
ever noticed.
'Why are you so silent?' asked the man one morning when dinner had
passed before his wife had uttered one word. 'A little while ago you
used to be chattering all the day long, and now I have almost forgotten
the sound of your voice.'
'Oh, nothing; I did not feel inclined to talk, that was all!' She
stopped, and added carelessly after a pause, 'Don't you ever wonder what
is in that soup-tureen?'
'No, never,' replied the man. 'It is no affair of ours,' and the
conversation dropped once more, but as time went on, the woman spoke
less and less, and seemed so wretched that her husband grew quite
frightened about her. As to her food, she refused one thing after
another.
'My dear wife,' said the man at last, 'you really must eat something.
What in the world is the matter with you? If you go on like this you
will die.'
'I would rather die than not know what is in that tureen,' she burst
forth so violently that the husband was quite startled.
'Is that it?' cried he; 'are you making yourself miserable because of
that? Why, you know we should be turned out of the palace, and sent
away to starve.'
'Oh no, we shouldn't. The king is too good-natured. Of course he didn't
mean a little thing like this! Besides, there is no need to lift the lid
off altogether. Just raise one corner so that I may peep. We are quite
alone: nobody will ever know.'
The man hesitated: it did seem a 'little thing,' and if it was to make
his wife contented and happy it was well worth the risk. So he took hold
of the handle of the cover and raised it very slowly and carefully,
while the woman stooped down to peep. Suddenly she started back with a
scream, for a small mouse had sprung from the inside of the tureen, and
had nearly hit her in the eye. Round and round the room it ran, round
and round they both ran after it, knocking down chairs and vases in
their efforts to catch the mouse and put it back in the tureen. In the
middle of all the noise the door opened, and the mouse ran out between
the feet of the king. In one instant both the man and his wife were
hiding under the table, and to all appearance the room was empty.
* * * * *
'You may as well come out,' said the king, 'and hear what I have to
say.'
'I know what it is,' answered the charcoal-burner, hanging his head.
'The mouse has escaped.'
'A guard of soldiers will take you back to your hut,' said the king.
'Your wife has the key.'
* * * * *
'Weren't they silly?' cried the grandchildren of the charcoal-burners
when they heard the story. 'How we wish that we had had the chance!
We should never have wanted to know what was in the soup-tureen!'
From 'Littérature Orale de l'Auvergne,' par P. Sébillot.
Story DNA
Moral
Unchecked curiosity and disobedience can lead to the loss of great fortune and happiness.
Plot Summary
A starving charcoal-burner and his wife are offered a life of luxury in the king's palace, provided they obey one rule: never lift the lid of a specific soup-tureen. Despite enjoying immense wealth and comfort, the wife becomes consumed by curiosity about the tureen's contents. She eventually persuades her reluctant husband to peek, releasing a mouse and revealing their disobedience to the king. As a consequence, they are immediately expelled from the palace and returned to their former poverty, having lost their paradise due to their inability to resist temptation.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to prosperity to loss
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This tale directly references the biblical story of Adam and Eve, reinterpreting the 'fall from grace' through the lens of a simple, domestic temptation. The collection by P. Sébillot indicates its roots in French oral tradition.
Plot Beats (14)
- An impoverished charcoal-burner and his wife are starving in their forest hut.
- The wife laments their fate, blaming Eve's curiosity for all human suffering, and wishes she were less curious.
- The king, hunting nearby, overhears her and offers them a life of luxury in his palace if they obey his orders exactly.
- The couple agrees and is brought to the palace, where they are bathed, clothed, and given a lavish dinner.
- The king instructs them to enjoy everything but warns them never to lift the lid of a specific soup-tureen, or their good fortune will end.
- For days, they live in blissful luxury, enjoying all the palace offers.
- The wife becomes increasingly preoccupied with the soup-tureen, growing silent and miserable, despite her husband's contentment.
- She pressures her husband to just 'peek' under the lid, arguing the king is good-natured and won't mind.
- The husband, wanting to make his wife happy, reluctantly agrees to lift the lid slightly.
- A mouse springs out of the tureen, startling them, and they frantically try to catch it.
- The king enters during their commotion, and the mouse escapes between his feet.
- The king, knowing they disobeyed, tells them a guard will take them back to their hut.
- The couple is returned to their former poverty, having lost their paradise.
- The story concludes with the charcoal-burner's grandchildren remarking on their ancestors' foolishness and their own supposed lack of curiosity.
Characters
Charcoal-burner ★ protagonist
Strong, initially handsome but becomes rosier and plumper in the palace
Attire: Initially poor, simple work clothes; later, silken clothes provided by the king
Initially hardworking and content, but easily swayed by his wife's curiosity; somewhat passive and obedient
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A sturdy middle-aged man with a soot-stained face and weary eyes, his dark hair matted under a worn leather cap. He wears a rough, patched tunic of undyed wool, heavy leather apron, and muddy trousers tucked into scuffed boots. His posture is slightly stooped, one hand resting on a long-handled axe, the other holding a smoldering log. He stands near a smoldering charcoal kiln in a forest clearing, his expression one of tired determination. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Charcoal-burner's wife ★ protagonist
Handsome, but becomes increasingly wretched and refuses food
Attire: Initially poor, simple work clothes; later, silken clothes provided by the king
Curious, discontent, and prone to complaining; manipulative and ultimately responsible for their downfall
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A middle-aged woman with a kind, weathered face and warm brown eyes. Her dark hair is tied back with a simple cloth scarf. She wears a practical, earth-toned woolen dress with a stained apron, sturdy leather boots, and a rough shawl. She stands with a determined yet gentle posture, holding a wooden basket of forest mushrooms. Behind her is a misty, sun-dappled forest clearing with a smoldering charcoal kiln in the distance. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ◆ supporting
Implied to be well-fed and healthy
Attire: Royal hunting attire, appropriate for the period and his status
Good-natured, observant, and subtly manipulative; enjoys testing human nature
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A middle-aged man with a neatly trimmed salt-and-pepper beard and kind, tired eyes. He wears an ornate golden crown adorned with red and blue jewels. His rich, crimson velvet robe is trimmed with white ermine fur and fastened with a large golden clasp. He stands tall, holding a polished wooden scepter topped with a golden orb. His expression is calm, dignified, and slightly weary. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Mouse ○ minor
Small, agile
Innocent, serves as the catalyst for the couple's downfall
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A small, young anthropomorphic mouse with soft grey fur and large, round ears. Wearing simple, slightly patched brown overalls over a cream-colored shirt. Large, timid dark eyes and a twitching pink nose. Standing hunched with paws clasped nervously in front, tail curled around one ankle. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Charcoal-burner's Hut
A bare room with no furniture, not even a chair, implying extreme poverty.
Mood: desolate, unhappy
The king first encounters the charcoal-burner and his wife and offers them a chance at paradise.
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Late afternoon light filters through a single grimy window into a stark, empty hut. The rough-hewn log walls are dark with soot, the packed earth floor bare except for scattered ash. A cold, dying hearth holds a few gray embers, its smoke staining the ceiling. The air is thick with the scent of cold charcoal. Through the open doorway, a dense, misty forest of birch and pine looms, the path leading away muddy and indistinct. The palette is muted: charcoal gray, ashen white, damp brown, and the deep green of the encroaching woods. The atmosphere is one of profound stillness and poverty. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Palace Bath
Green marble baths filled with water that looks like the sea.
Mood: luxurious, pleasant
The charcoal-burner and his wife are introduced to the luxuries of the palace.
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An opulent palace bath at dawn, with soft morning light filtering through tall arched windows. The centerpiece is a vast, sunken pool lined with polished green marble veined with gold, filled with translucent water that shifts from emerald near the edges to a deep, serene sapphire blue at its center, mimicking the sea. Gentle ripples catch the light, creating dancing reflections on the vaulted ceiling. Steam rises softly, curling around towering marble columns and lush potted ferns. The air feels misty and tranquil. The floor is a mosaic of turquoise and ivory tiles, slightly wet and gleaming. Ornate brass fixtures and towels on a carved bench are the only furnishings, emphasizing the grand, empty space. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Dining Hall
A small hall where dinner is laid out.
Mood: tempting, forbidden
The king gives his one rule: do not lift the lid of the soup-tureen.
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Evening light filters through a high arched window into a cozy, stone-walled dining hall. A long, rough-hewn wooden table dominates the center, set with simple pewter plates, goblets, and steaming bowls of stew. Tall beeswax candles in iron holders cast a warm, flickering glow, their light dancing on the dark wooden beams of the vaulted ceiling. A large, crackling fireplace in the far wall illuminates worn tapestries depicting forest scenes. Through the window, a sliver of a deep blue twilight sky is visible above a silent, snow-dusted pine forest. The atmosphere is quiet, inviting, and steeped in rustic, old-world charm. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Palace Gardens
Gardens filled with rare flowers, fruits, and singing birds.
Mood: idyllic, beautiful
Illustrates the paradise the couple enjoys before their curiosity gets the better of them.
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Golden hour bathes the sprawling palace gardens in warm, amber light. Lush, manicured hedges form intricate pathways leading to a central marble fountain, its water shimmering. Rare, exotic flowers bloom in vibrant clusters: towering moon orchids, luminescent blue roses, and fiery sunburst lilies. Fruit trees with glowing, jewel-toned fruits—crystal apples and sapphire pears—dot the landscape. A soft mist hangs in the air, catching the light. In the distance, elegant stone archways and terraces of the white marble palace are visible. Birds with iridescent plumage flit between branches, their presence implied by the serene, magical atmosphere. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.