Janni and the Draken

by Andrew Lang · from The Grey Fairy Book

fairy tale adventure solemn Ages 8-14 1604 words 7 min read
Cover: Janni and the Draken

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 333 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Janni and his sister trade sheep. They get three dogs. They walk on. They find a big, empty castle. Monsters hide below. Janni and his sister live there.

When Janni hunts, a monster comes up. Sister makes friends with the monster. They are happy as friends. The monster wants to hurt Janni. He tricks Sister. He tells her to ask for fruit. Sister pretends to be sick. She asks for fruit from a far garden.

Janni goes with his loyal dogs. He sleeps in the garden. The dogs chase the monsters away. Janni picks the fruit. He goes home. Sister eats the fruit. She feels better. The monster hides deeper below.

The monster tricks Sister again. He tells her to ask for more fruit. Janni goes to a new garden. He sleeps. The dogs scare the monsters away. Janni picks the fruit. He goes home. Sister eats it. The monster hides even deeper.

The monster tricks Sister a third time. He tells her to ask for fruit again. Janni goes to the next garden. He sleeps. Monsters come. The dogs fight them hard. Janni wakes up. He helps his dogs. They free a Princess. Janni gives her a ring. He asks her to help others.

Janni brings the fruit home. Sister eats it. The monster is scared now. He tells Sister to find Janni's secret. Sister asks Janni. He says his strength is in his fingers. Sister ties his fingers. The monster comes. He makes Janni get lost in dark. He traps Janni in a deep hole.

Some kind people find Janni. They help him. Janni cannot see well. He asks to go to the Princess. The Princess sees his ring. She knows him. She brings a helpful Witch. The Witch uses magic. Janni can see again.

Janni goes back to the castle. He confronts the monster and his sister. He makes them leave for good. Janni marries the Princess. They are very happy. The loyal dogs are with them. Goodness is rewarded.

Original Story 1604 words · 7 min read

Janni and the Draken

Once there was a man who shunned the world, and lived in the wilderness.

He owned nothing but a flock of sheep, whose milk and wool he sold, and

so procured himself bread to eat; he also carried wooden spoons, and

sold them. He had a wife and one little girl, and after a long time

his wife had another child. The evening it was born the man went to

the nearest village to fetch a nurse, and on the way he met a monk who

begged him for a night’s lodging. This the man willingly granted, and

took him home with him. There being no one far nor near to baptize the

child, the man asked the monk to do him this service, and the child was

given the name of Janni.

In the course of time Janni’s parents died, and he and his sister were

left alone in the world; soon affairs went badly with them, so they

determined to wander away to seek their fortune. In packing up, the

sister found a knife which the monk had left for his godson, and this

she gave to her brother.

Then they went on their way, taking with them the three sheep which were

all that remained of their flocks. After wandering for three days

they met a man with three dogs who proposed that they should exchange

animals, he taking the sheep, and they the dogs. The brother and sister

were quite pleased at this arrangement, and after the exchange was made

they separated, and went their different ways.

Janni and his sister in course of time came to a great castle, in which

dwelt forty Draken, who, when they heard that Janni had come, fled forty

fathoms underground.

So Janni found the castle deserted, and abode there with his sister, and

every day went out to hunt with the weapons the Draken had left in the

castle.

One day, when he was away hunting, one of the Draken came up to get

provisions, not knowing that there was anyone in the castle. When he saw

Janni’s sister he was terrified, but she told him not to be afraid, and

by-and-by they fell in love with each other, for every time that Janni

went to hunt the sister called the Drakos up. Thus they went on making

love to each other till at length, unknown to Janni, they got married.

Then, when it was too late, the sister repented, and was afraid of

Janni’s wrath when he found it out.

One day the Drakos came to her, and said: ‘You must pretend to be ill,

and when Janni asks what ails you, and what you want, you must answer:

“Cherries,” and when he inquires where these are to be found, you must

say: “There are some in a garden a day’s journey from here.” Then your

brother will go there, and will never come back, for there dwell three

of my brothers who will look after him well.’

Then the sister did as the Drakos advised, and next day Janni set out to

fetch the cherries, taking his three dogs with him. When he came to the

garden where the cherries grew he jumped off his horse, drank some water

from the spring, which rose there, and fell directly into a deep sleep.

The Draken came round about to eat him, but the dogs flung themselves on

them and tore them in pieces, and scratched a grave in the ground with

their paws, and buried the Draken so that Janni might not see their dead

bodies. When Janni awoke, and saw his dogs all covered with blood, he

believed that they had caught, somewhere, a wild beast, and was angry

because they had left none of it for him. But he plucked the cherries,

and took them back to his sister.

When the Drakos heard that Janni had come back, he fled for fear forty

fathoms underground. And the sister ate the cherries and declared

herself well again.

The next day, when Janni was gone to hunt, the Drakos came out, and

advised the sister that she should pretend to be ill again, and when her

brother asked her what she would like, she should answer ‘Quinces,’ and

when he inquired where these were to be found, she should say: ‘In a

garden distant about two days’ journey.’ Then would Janni certainly be

destroyed, for there dwelt six brothers of the Drakos, each of whom had

two heads.

The sister did as she was advised, and next day Janni again set

off, taking his three dogs with him. When he came to the garden he

dismounted, sat down to rest a little, and fell fast asleep. First there

came three Draken round about to eat him, and when these three had been

worried by the dogs, there came three others who were worried in like

manner. Then the dogs again dug a grave and buried the dead Draken, that

their master might not see them. When Janni awoke and beheld the dogs

all covered with blood, he thought, as before, that they had killed a

wild beast, and was again angry with them for leaving him nothing. But

he took the quinces and brought them back to his sister, who, when she

had eaten them, declared herself better. The Drakos, when he heard that

Janni had come back, fled for fear forty fathoms deeper underground.

Next day, when Janni was hunting, the Drakos went to the sister and

advised that she should again pretend to be ill, and should beg for some

pears, which grew in a garden three days’ journey from the castle. From

this quest Janni would certainly never return, for there dwelt nine

brothers of the Drakos, each of whom had three heads.

The sister did as she was told, and next day Janni, taking his three

dogs with him, went to get the pears. When he came to the garden he laid

himself down to rest, and soon fell asleep.

Then first came three Draken to eat him, and when the dogs had worried

these, six others came and fought the dogs a long time. The noise of

this combat awoke Janni, and he slew the Draken, and knew at last why

the dogs were covered with blood.

After that he freed all whom the Draken held prisoners, amongst others,

a king’s daughter. Out of gratitude she would have taken him for her

husband; but he put her off, saying: ‘For the kindness that I have been

able to do to you, you shall receive in this castle all the blind and

lame who pass this way.’ The princess promised him to do so, and on his

departure gave him a ring.

So Janni plucked the pears and took them to his sister, who, when she

had eaten them, declared she felt better. When, however, the Drakos

heard that Janni had come back yet a third time safe and sound, he fled

for fright forty fathoms deeper underground; and, next day, when Janni

was away hunting, he crept out and said to the sister: ‘Now are we

indeed both lost, unless you find out from him wherein his strength

lies, and then between us we will contrive to do away with him.’

When, therefore, Janni had come back from hunting, and sat at evening

with his sister by the fire, she begged him to tell her wherein lay

his strength, and he answered: ‘It lies in my two fingers; if these are

bound together then all my strength disappears.’

‘That I will not believe,’ said the sister, ‘unless I see it for

myself.’

Then he let her tie his fingers together with a thread, and immediately

he became powerless. Then the sister called up the Drakos, who, when he

had come forth, tore out Janni’s eyes, gave them to his dogs to eat, and

threw him into a dry well.

Now it happened that some travellers, going to draw water from this

well, heard Janni groaning at the bottom. They came near, and asked him

where he was, and he begged them to draw him up from the well, for he

was a poor unfortunate man.

The travellers let a rope down and drew him up to daylight. It was not

till then that he first became aware that he was blind, and he begged

the travellers to lead him to the country of the king whose daughter he

had freed, and they would be well repaid for their trouble.

When they had brought him there he sent to beg the princess to come to

him; but she did not recognise him till he had shown her the ring she

had given him.

Then she remembered him, and took him with her into the castle.

When she learnt what had befallen him she called together all the

sorceresses in the country in order that they should tell her where the

eyes were. At last she found one who declared that she knew where they

were, and that she could restore them. This sorceress then went straight

to the castle where dwelt the sister and the Drakos, and gave something

to the dogs to eat which caused the eyes to reappear. She took them with

her and put them back in Janni’s head, so that he saw as well as before.

Then he returned to the castle of the Drakos, whom he slew as well as

his sister; and, taking his dogs with him, went back to the princess and

they were immediately married.


Story DNA fairy tale · solemn

Moral

Betrayal, even from those closest to you, will ultimately be met with justice, and loyalty will be rewarded.

Plot Summary

Orphaned Janni and his sister trade their sheep for three loyal dogs and settle in a deserted castle. Unbeknownst to Janni, his sister marries a Drakos, who repeatedly plots Janni's death through quests for magical fruits, only for Janni's dogs to defeat the Draken. Finally, the sister betrays Janni by revealing his weakness, leading to him being blinded and abandoned. Rescued and reunited with a princess he once saved, Janni regains his sight with the help of a sorceress, returns to the castle, slays the Drakos and his treacherous sister, and marries the princess.

Themes

betrayalloyaltyperseverancejustice

Emotional Arc

innocence to suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: Draken (supernatural beings), Dogs with supernatural fighting and grave-digging abilities, Sorceress with ability to restore eyes
the monk's knife (symbol of protection/fate)the three dogs (loyalty, protection)the princess's ring (recognition, promise)

Cultural Context

Origin: Greek
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang collected fairy tales from various cultures; this story features elements common in Eastern European and Greek folklore, particularly the 'Draken' which are often depicted as malevolent, sometimes human-like, beings.

Plot Beats (18)

  1. A man living in the wilderness has a daughter and then a son, Janni, who is baptized by a monk.
  2. Janni's parents die, leaving him and his sister alone; they find a knife left by the monk and decide to seek their fortune.
  3. They trade their three sheep for three dogs and continue their journey.
  4. They discover a large castle, deserted because forty Draken have fled underground upon their arrival.
  5. Janni's sister secretly falls in love with and marries one of the Draken, who emerges when Janni is hunting.
  6. The Drakos plots to kill Janni, instructing the sister to feign illness and ask for cherries from a garden guarded by three Draken.
  7. Janni retrieves the cherries, his dogs killing the Draken while he sleeps, and returns, making the Drakos flee deeper underground.
  8. The Drakos plots again, instructing the sister to ask for quinces from a garden guarded by six two-headed Draken.
  9. Janni retrieves the quinces, his dogs again killing the Draken, and returns, making the Drakos flee even deeper.
  10. The Drakos plots a third time, instructing the sister to ask for pears from a garden guarded by nine three-headed Draken.
  11. Janni retrieves the pears; this time, he awakens during the fight and helps his dogs kill the Draken, freeing a king's daughter.
  12. Janni gives the princess a ring and sends her to his castle, telling her to care for the blind and lame.
  13. The Drakos, seeing Janni return unharmed, convinces the sister to discover Janni's weakness.
  14. Janni's sister binds his fingers, making him powerless, then calls the Drakos, who blinds Janni and throws him into a dry well.
  15. Travelers rescue Janni from the well; he realizes he is blind and asks them to lead him to the princess's country.
  16. The princess recognizes Janni by his ring and brings a sorceress who restores his eyes by making the dogs regurgitate them.
  17. Janni returns to the Draken's castle, slays the Drakos and his sister, and then marries the princess.
  18. Janni and the princess are married and live happily ever after.

Characters 6 characters

Janni ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Strong, capable, but initially naive

Attire: Hunter's attire: tunic, leggings, sturdy boots, perhaps a leather jerkin; carries a knife

Blindfolded, being led by his dogs

Brave, trusting, ultimately vengeful

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A young boy around ten years old with a curious and determined expression. He has messy, sandy-brown hair and bright, observant eyes. He wears a simple, slightly worn tunic of undyed linen over brown trousers, and sturdy leather boots. A small, well-used leather satchel is slung across his chest. He stands at the edge of a sun-dappled forest path, leaning forward slightly as he peers into the woods, one hand resting on the strap of his satchel. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Sister ⚔ antagonist

human young adult female

Not explicitly described, but likely attractive to the Drakos

Attire: Simple dress, appropriate for a peasant girl in a medieval setting

Offering cherries/quinces/pears with a false smile

Weak-willed, easily manipulated, treacherous

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A stern, middle-aged woman with sharp cheekbones and cold, calculating eyes. Her graying hair is pulled back into a severe bun, accentuating her severe expression. She wears a high-collared, dark velvet gown with intricate black lace trim, her posture rigid and imposing. Her hands are clenched at her sides, fingers long and pale. A faint, cruel smirk plays on her thin lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Drakos ⚔ antagonist

magical creature adult male

Reptilian, dwells underground, multiple heads (in some instances)

Attire: None specified, likely wears no clothing

Reptilian head emerging from underground

Deceptive, cowardly, murderous

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An imposing older male figure with sharp, angular features and a cruel, thin-lipped smile. His pale skin contrasts with dark, silver-streaked hair swept back from a high forehead. He wears an elaborate, high-collared robe of deep black and charcoal grey, adorned with subtle metallic embroidery and sharp, jagged shoulder pieces. One hand is raised, fingers curled as if holding an invisible orb, while the other rests on the hilt of a sinister-looking dagger at his belt. His posture is tall, rigid, and commanding, with an intense, piercing gaze. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Dogs ◆ supporting

animal adult unknown

Loyal, strong, covered in blood after battles

Three dogs, covered in blood, guarding Janni

Loyal, protective, brave

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A loyal adult anthropomorphic dog with warm brown fur, wearing a simple green tunic and a worn leather vest, standing attentively with a friendly and alert expression. He holds a small glowing lantern in one paw, his posture upright and ready to help. His tail wags slightly, and his ears are perked forward. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Princess ◆ supporting

human young adult female

Beautiful, grateful

Attire: Royal attire: gown, jewelry, crown or circlet

Holding the ring, recognizing Janni

Grateful, compassionate, loyal

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A young woman in her late teens with kind, gentle eyes and a soft smile. She has long, flowing chestnut hair adorned with a simple silver circlet. She wears an elegant yet practical gown of soft blue velvet with delicate silver embroidery at the cuffs and neckline. Her posture is poised and graceful, standing with one hand lightly resting on the back of a wooden chair. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Sorceress ◆ supporting

human adult female

Mysterious, powerful

Attire: Robes, possibly adorned with symbols or charms

Holding Janni's eyes in her hands

Wise, helpful, skilled in magic

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A middle-aged woman with a kind yet powerful expression, her long silver-streaked black hair flowing over the shoulders of her deep blue velvet robes. The robes are embroidered with subtle silver constellations and fastened with a crescent moon clasp. She stands tall in a confident posture, one hand gently raised as a soft, glowing orb of light hovers above her palm. Her other hand rests on an ancient, gnarled wooden staff. She wears simple leather sandals. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 5 locations
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Wilderness Dwelling

outdoor

Isolated home in the wilderness, where the man lives with his wife, daughter, and sheep.

Mood: secluded, simple, humble

Janni is born and spends his early childhood here; parents die leaving Janni and his sister alone.

sheep wooden spoons milk wool
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A cozy, thatched-roof stone cottage nestled in a misty, ancient forest clearing at twilight. Warm, golden light spills from its small, rounded windows, contrasting with the deep blue shadows of towering oak and pine trees. A gentle, winding path leads to a wooden door, beside which a small, fenced sheepfold with a few resting sheep is visible. Delicate fireflies begin to glow among the ferns and wildflowers carpeting the forest floor. The sky above the dense canopy shows the first emerging stars. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Draken's Castle

indoor

A large, deserted castle with weapons left behind by the Draken.

Mood: eerie, empty, dangerous

Janni and his sister find the castle; the sister falls in love with a Draken and marries him; Janni is eventually blinded here.

weapons forty fathoms underground provisions
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A vast, crumbling stone castle looms under a twilight sky, its towers jagged against clouds tinged with deep violet and bruised orange. The deserted courtyard is choked with weeds and cracked flagstones, littered with abandoned Draken weapons: massive, rusted greatswords and dented shields half-buried in ivy. Moonlight filters through broken stained glass, casting pale, colorful shards on the damp ground. The air is heavy with mist, swirling around the dark, empty archways and silent battlements. The mood is one of profound stillness and forgotten grandeur. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Orchard Gardens

outdoor

Three distinct gardens, each a day's journey apart, growing cherries, quinces, and pears respectively. Each guarded by increasingly powerful Draken.

Mood: deceptive, dangerous, magical

Janni is sent to each garden by his sister, where he battles the Draken with the help of his dogs.

cherry tree quince tree pear tree spring sleeping spot
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A sweeping vista of three terraced gardens at dawn, bathed in soft golden light. In the foreground, a cherry orchard with gnarled, dark-barked trees laden with deep crimson fruit, petals drifting in the cool mist. A cobblestone path winds upward to the middle terrace, a quince garden where the trees have silver-green leaves and heavy, golden-yellow fruits glow amidst weathered stone walls and arches. In the distant background, the highest terrace holds a pear orchard, its elegant trees bearing pale green fruit, surrounded by ancient, towering cyclopean ruins and a single, majestic stone archway. Each garden is distinct, separated by gentle slopes and connected by the winding path, under a pastel sky of lavender and pink. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Dry Well

transitional night

A deep, dry well where Janni is thrown after being blinded.

Mood: desolate, hopeless, dark

Janni is rescued by travelers after being thrown into the well.

stone walls rope darkness
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A deep cylindrical stone well, its rough-hewn walls covered in patches of damp moss and lichen, plunges into shadow. A single shaft of dusty afternoon light pierces the gloom from the circular opening far above, illuminating swirling motes of dust and the dry, cracked earth at the bottom. The air is still and cold, the silence broken only by the distant drip of moisture. The surrounding rim is overgrown with tangled ivy and gnarled roots that creep over the weathered stone. Muted earth tones of grey, brown, and deep green dominate, with the stark contrast of the bright sky above. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Princess's Castle

indoor

The castle of the king's daughter whom Janni rescued.

Mood: grateful, healing, regal

Janni is taken in by the princess, his sight is restored, and he eventually marries her.

sorceresses ring
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A grand fairy tale castle at sunrise, bathed in soft golden and rose-colored light. The majestic white stone fortress features tall, slender spires with blue-tiled roofs, intricate balconies, and fluttering silk banners. It sits atop a gentle green hill, surrounded by a sparkling moat and lush, formal gardens with blooming rose bushes and sculpted hedges. A wide, cobbled path leads over an arched stone bridge to the towering main gate. In the distance, misty blue mountains and a deep, enchanted forest frame the scene under a pastel pink and orange sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration