Lovely Ilonka

by Andrew Lang · from The Crimson Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1477 words 7 min read
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Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 429 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, a prince wanted to marry. His father the king said, "No. You must do a brave thing first." The prince was sad. He went to find three special plants.

He asked an old woman for help. She called her birds. The birds did not know. He asked an old woman for help. She called her birds. The birds did not know. He asked another old woman for help. She called her birds. One bird knew the way!

The bird showed him a big, high wall. The prince jumped over the wall. He found the three plants. He took them and went home.

He opened the first plant. A lovely girl came out. "Give me water," she said. There was no water. She flew away. He opened the second plant. A lovely girl came out. "Give me water," she said. There was no water. She flew away.

He was very careful with the third plant. He waited by a well. He opened it. A girl, Ilonka, came out. "Give me water," she said. He gave her water. She did not fly away. "I am your love," she said. "I am your love," he said. They promised to marry.

The prince left Ilonka with some helpers. He went to get a coach. One helper was bad. He pushed Ilonka into the well. He put his Bad Daughter in her place. The Bad Daughter wore Ilonka's pretty dress.

The prince came back. He saw the wrong girl. He was sad. But he married her. He became the king.

Ilonka was a duck in the well. A man found her. She became a girl again. She worked in the king's house. She had a magic spinning wheel. It spun by itself.

The wrong queen wanted the magic wheel. "I will give it to you," said Ilonka. "Let me sleep in the king's room." The queen agreed. She gave the king a sleeping drink at night. Ilonka came to the king. "My love, it is me, Ilonka," she said. The king did not wake up. He could not hear her. She tried again the next night. The king slept again.

Some good helpers told the king the truth. "Do not drink the queen's drink," they said. That night, the king pretended to sleep. Ilonka came in. "My love, it is me, Ilonka," she said. The king woke up! He was so happy. Ilonka told him her whole story.

The king sent the bad helpers away. He married Ilonka. They were very happy. Good wins over bad. True love is strong.

Original Story 1477 words · 7 min read

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Lovely Ilonka

There was once a king’s son who told his father that he wished to

marry.

“No, no!” said the king; “you must not be in such a hurry. Wait till

you have done some great deed. My father did not let me marry till I

had won the golden sword you see me wear.”

The prince was much disappointed, but he never dreamed of disobeying

his father, and he began to think with all his might what he could do.

It was no use staying at home, so one day he wandered out into the

world to try his luck, and as he walked along he came to a little hut

in which he found an old woman crouching over the fire.

“Good evening, mother. I see you have lived long in this world; do you

know anything about the three bulrushes?”

“Yes, indeed, I’ve lived long and been much about in the world, but I

have never seen or heard anything of what you ask. Still, if you will

wait till to-morrow I may be able to tell you something.”

Well, he waited till the morning, and quite early the old woman

appeared and took out a little pipe and blew in it, and in a moment all

the crows in the world were flying about her. Not one was missing. Then

she asked if they knew anything about the three bulrushes, but not one

of them did.

The prince went on his way, and a little further on he found another

hut in which lived an old man. On being questioned the old man said he

knew nothing, but begged the prince to stay overnight, and the next

morning the old man called all the ravens together, but they too had

nothing to tell.

The prince bade him farewell and set out. He wandered so far that he

crossed seven kingdoms, and at last, one evening, he came to a little

house in which was an old woman.

“Good evening, dear mother,” said he politely.

“Good evening to you, my dear son,” answered the old woman. “It is

lucky for you that you spoke to me or you would have met with a

horrible death. But may I ask where are you going?”

“I am seeking the three bulrushes. Do you know anything about them?”

“I don’t know anything myself, but wait till to-morrow. Perhaps I can

tell you then.” So the next morning she blew on her pipe, and lo! and

behold every magpie in the world flew up. That is to say, all the

magpies except one who had broken a leg and a wing. The old woman sent

after it at once, and when she questioned the magpies the crippled one

was the only one who knew where the three bulrushes were.

Then the prince started off with the lame magpie. They went on and on

till they reached a great stone wall, many, many feet high.

“Now, prince,” said the magpie, “the three bulrushes are behind that

wall.”

The prince wasted no time. He set his horse at the wall and leaped over

it. Then he looked about for the three bulrushes, pulled them up and

set off with them on his way home. As he rode along one of the

bulrushes happened to knock against something. It split open and, only

think! out sprang a lovely girl, who said: “My heart’s love, you are

mine and I am yours; do give me a glass of water.”

But how could the prince give it her when there was no water at hand?

So the lovely maiden flew away. He split the second bulrush as an

experiment and just the same thing happened.

How careful he was of the third bulrush! He waited till he came to a

well, and there he split it open, and out sprang a maiden seven times

lovelier than either of the others, and she too said: “My heart’s love,

I am yours and you are mine; do give me a glass of water.”

This time the water was ready and the girl did not fly away, but she

and the prince promised to love each other always. Then they set out

for home.

They soon reached the prince’s country, and as he wished to bring his

promised bride back in a fine coach he went on to the town to fetch

one. In the field where the well was, the king’s swineherds and

cowherds were feeding their droves, and the prince left Ilonka (for

that was her name) in their care.

Unluckily the chief swineherd had an ugly old daughter, and whilst the

prince was away he dressed her up in fine clothes, and threw Ilonka

into the well.

The prince returned before long, bringing with him his father and

mother and a great train of courtiers to escort Ilonka home. But how

they all stared when they saw the swineherd’s ugly daughter! However,

there was nothing for it but to take her home; and, two days later, the

prince married her, and his father gave up the crown to him.

But he had no peace! He knew very well he had been cheated, though he

could not think how. Once he desired to have some water brought him

from the well into which Ilonka had been thrown. The coachman went for

it and, in the bucket he pulled up, a pretty little duck was swimming.

He looked wonderingly at it, and all of a sudden it disappeared and he

found a dirty looking girl standing near him. The girl returned with

him and managed to get a place as housemaid in the palace.

Of course she was very busy all day long, but whenever she had a little

spare time she sat down to spin. Her distaff turned of itself and her

spindle span by itself and the flax wound itself off; and however much

she might use there was always plenty left.

When the queen—or, rather, the swineherd’s daughter—heard of this, she

very much wished to have the distaff, but the girl flatly refused to

give it to her. However, at last she consented on condition that she

might sleep one night in the king’s room. The queen was very angry, and

scolded her well; but as she longed to have the distaff she consented,

though she gave the king a sleeping draught at supper.

Then the girl went to the king’s room looking seven times lovelier than

ever. She bent over the sleeper and said: “My heart’s love, I am yours

and you are mine. Speak to me but once; I am your Ilonka.” But the king

was so sound asleep he neither heard nor spoke, and Ilonka left the

room, sadly thinking he was ashamed to own her.

Soon after the queen again sent to say that she wanted to buy the

spindle. The girl agreed to let her have it on the same conditions as

before; but this time, also, the queen took care to give the king a

sleeping draught. And once more Ilonka went to the king’s room and

spoke to him; whisper as sweetly as she might she could get no answer.

Now some of the king’s servants had taken note of the matter, and

warned their master not to eat and drink anything that the queen

offered him, as for two nights running she had given him a sleeping

draught. The queen had no idea that her doings had been discovered; and

when, a few days later, she wanted the flax, and had to pay the same

price for it, she felt no fears at all.

At supper that night the queen offered the king all sorts of nice

things to eat and drink, but he declared he was not hungry, and went

early to bed.

The queen repented bitterly her promise to the girl, but it was too

late to recall it; for Ilonka had already entered the king’s room,

where he lay anxiously waiting for something, he knew not what. All of

a sudden he saw a lovely maiden who bent over him and said: “My dearest

love, I am yours and you are mine. Speak to me, for I am your Ilonka.”

At these words the king’s heart bounded within him. He sprang up and

embraced and kissed her, and she told him all her adventures since the

moment he had left her. And when he heard all that Ilonka had suffered,

and how he had been deceived, he vowed he would be revenged; so he gave

orders that the swineherd, his wife and daughter should all be hanged;

and so they were.

The next day the king was married, with great rejoicings, to the fair

Ilonka; and if they are not yet dead—why, they are still living.

[From Ungarische Mährchen.]


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True love and virtue will eventually triumph over deceit and wickedness.

Plot Summary

A prince, tasked with a great deed before marriage, seeks the mythical three bulrushes. He finds them, and from the third, the beautiful Ilonka emerges, whom he promises to marry. However, while he fetches a coach, a wicked swineherd replaces Ilonka with his ugly daughter, throwing Ilonka into a well where she transforms into a duck, then a housemaid. Through magical spinning tools, Ilonka repeatedly tries to reveal her identity to the king, who is drugged by the false queen. Eventually, warned by servants, the king stays awake, hears Ilonka's story, and restores her to her rightful place, punishing the deceivers.

Themes

identitydeceptionperseverancetrue love

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: rule of three, repetition of phrases

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals (magpie), magical objects (bulrushes yielding maidens, self-spinning tools), transformation (Ilonka into a duck, then back), sleeping draughts
the three bulrushes (representing the quest and Ilonka's origin)the well (place of transformation and concealment)the magical spinning tools (symbolizing Ilonka's true identity and virtue)

Cultural Context

Origin: Hungarian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang collected this tale from 'Ungarische Mährchen' (Hungarian Fairy Tales), reflecting Central European folkloric traditions.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A prince is told by his father he must perform a great deed before marrying.
  2. The prince leaves home to find the 'three bulrushes'.
  3. He consults three old women, each with a different bird (crows, ravens, magpies), to learn the location of the bulrushes.
  4. A crippled magpie guides him to a high wall, behind which he finds the bulrushes.
  5. He opens the first two bulrushes, releasing maidens who fly away due to lack of water.
  6. He opens the third bulrush by a well, releasing Ilonka, whom he promises to marry.
  7. The prince leaves Ilonka with swineherds to fetch a coach and his family.
  8. The chief swineherd throws Ilonka into the well and replaces her with his ugly daughter.
  9. The prince, his family, and courtiers are dismayed by the ugly bride but proceed with the marriage; the prince becomes king.
  10. Ilonka, transformed into a duck in the well, is found by a coachman and becomes a housemaid in the palace.
  11. Ilonka possesses magical spinning tools that attract the false queen's attention.
  12. Ilonka agrees to sell her tools if she can sleep in the king's room, but the false queen drugs the king.
  13. Ilonka attempts to speak to the king twice, but he is asleep and doesn't hear her pleas.
  14. Servants warn the king about the sleeping draughts, and he pretends to sleep, allowing Ilonka to reveal herself and her story.
  15. The king executes the swineherd family, marries Ilonka, and they live happily ever after.

Characters 5 characters

Prince ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Not described, but assumed to be handsome and strong.

Attire: Princely attire, including fine fabrics, possibly a tunic, hose, and boots. Later, royal robes.

Golden sword at his side, a symbol of his royal duty.

Determined, easily deceived, ultimately just.

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A young man in his early twenties with a strong jawline and determined blue eyes. He wears a richly embroidered royal blue tunic with gold trim over a white shirt, dark leather boots, and a deep crimson cape clasped at his shoulder. His short, wavy brown hair is neatly styled. He stands confidently on a castle balcony at sunrise, one hand resting on the hilt of a sheathed sword at his hip, gazing into the distance with a resolute expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Lovely Ilonka ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Described as 'lovely' and 'seven times lovelier' than the other maidens.

Attire: Initially appears from the bulrush in simple attire, later as a housemaid in plain clothes, and finally in royal wedding garments.

Emerging from a split bulrush, holding a glass of water.

Patient, loving, persistent.

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A young woman in her late teens with long, wavy chestnut hair and determined green eyes. She wears a practical yet elegant forest green dress with a brown leather corset belt, sturdy brown boots, and a small satchel slung across her body. Her posture is confident and ready for adventure, one hand gently resting on the bark of a mossy ancient tree in a sun-dappled forest clearing. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

King ◆ supporting

human adult male

Not described, but assumed to be regal and imposing.

Attire: Royal robes and crown, signifying his authority.

His golden crown, symbolizing his reign.

Wise, traditional, trusting.

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A wise older king in his sixties with kind, crinkled eyes and a gentle smile, wearing a simple gold crown adorned with a single deep blue sapphire. He is dressed in rich, deep blue velvet robes with silver embroidery at the cuffs and collar, over a white tunic. He stands in a relaxed, benevolent pose, one hand resting on the pommel of a sheathed ceremonial sword at his hip. His beard and hair are neatly trimmed and silver-grey. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Swineherd's Ugly Daughter ⚔ antagonist

human young adult female

Described as 'ugly'.

Attire: Initially plain peasant clothes, then fine clothes stolen from Ilonka.

Awkwardly wearing clothes too fine for her station.

Deceitful, greedy, opportunistic.

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A young woman in her late teens with a sour, pinched expression, her face marked by a large, warty nose and a sneering mouth. Her greasy, dark hair is tied back in a messy, uneven knot. She wears a dirty, patched brown dress that is too short and a faded, stained apron. Her posture is slouched and aggressive, with one hand on her hip. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Old Woman (Magpie) ◆ supporting

human elderly female

Wrinkled face, hunched posture.

Attire: Simple, rustic clothing suitable for an old woman living in a hut.

Surrounded by a flock of magpies.

Helpful, knowledgeable, resourceful.

Image Prompt & Upload
An elderly woman with sharp, bird-like features and bright, knowing eyes. Her silver hair is neatly pinned up, with a few loose strands framing her face. She wears a layered dress of deep black and shimmering white fabrics, reminiscent of feathers, with a high collar. A shawl draped over her shoulders holds a subtle iridescent sheen. Her posture is slightly hunched but alert, one hand raised as if about to speak or point. Her expression is keen and observant, a slight, secretive smile on her lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Old Woman's Hut

indoor evening

A small, humble dwelling with an old woman crouching over a fire.

Mood: isolated, humble, possibly magical

The prince seeks information about the three bulrushes and learns how to summon the magpies.

fire old woman pipe
Image Prompt & Upload
Twilight descends upon a dense, whispering forest, where a humble, thatched-roof hut of weathered logs sits in a small clearing. Warm, flickering firelight spills from a crooked doorway and a stone chimney, casting long, dancing shadows across the mossy ground and a scattering of wildflowers. The sky above is a deep, velvety blue, with the first stars appearing. The air is still and cool, with a hint of woodsmoke. The scene is painted in contrasting tones of deep blues, purples, and the vibrant orange glow of the hearth. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Stone Wall

outdoor

A great stone wall, many feet high, concealing the three bulrushes.

Mood: mysterious, barrier

The prince leaps over the wall to find the three bulrushes.

stone wall horse
Image Prompt & Upload
An ancient, towering stone wall of immense height and weathered gray blocks stretches across the scene, its surface covered in patches of dark green moss and lichen. At its base, three tall, slender bulrushes with dark brown cylindrical heads rise from the damp earth, their reflections faintly visible in a shallow, misty puddle. The atmosphere is cool and quiet, with a soft, diffused dawn light filtering through a gentle ground mist. The surrounding ground is a mix of wet earth and sparse grass. The color palette is muted, featuring grays, deep greens, and earthy browns. The mood is silent, mysterious, and slightly melancholic. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Well in a Field

outdoor

A well located in a field where the king's swineherds and cowherds are feeding their droves.

Mood: pastoral, fateful

Ilonka emerges from the third bulrush; Ilonka is thrown into the well by the swineherd's daughter.

well swineherds cowherds droves
Image Prompt & Upload
A weathered stone well stands in the center of a vast, overgrown field at golden hour. The well's mossy stones and wooden roof cast long shadows across the tall, swaying grass and scattered wildflowers. A worn dirt path leads to the well from the distance. The warm, slanting sunlight illuminates the scene, creating a serene, pastoral atmosphere with soft clouds in a peach and lavender sky. Distant, ancient trees line the horizon. The colors are rich earth tones, deep greens, and golden light. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Royal Palace

indoor

The grand residence of the king and later the prince, where the prince marries the swineherd's daughter.

Mood: deceptive, tense, eventually triumphant

The prince is tricked into marrying the swineherd's daughter; Ilonka works as a housemaid and attempts to reveal her identity; the king discovers the truth and punishes the villains.

king's room distaff spindle throne
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Golden hour bathes a grand royal palace in warm, honeyed light. The palace features tall spires, arched windows, and intricate stone carvings, its pale stone facade glowing softly. A wide marble staircase descends from the main entrance to a meticulously kept garden with blooming rose bushes and sculpted hedges. A serene reflecting pool mirrors the palace and the dramatic, pastel-streaked twilight sky. Lush, ancient trees frame the scene, their leaves rustling in a gentle breeze. The atmosphere is serene, majestic, and filled with a soft, romantic glow. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration