How the Wicked Tanuki Was Punished

by Andrew Lang · from The Crimson Fairy Book

fairy tale moral tale solemn Ages 8-14 1121 words 5 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 322 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, a raccoon dog group lived in a forest. Food was very hard to find. They were often hungry.

Tanuki had a clever idea. "I will pretend to be dead," he said. "You can sell me in the village. Then buy food and come home. I will escape later."

Fox agreed. She changed into a man. She carried Tanuki to the village. A buyer gave her money. Fox bought food and hurried home. Tanuki escaped from the buyer's house. He ran back to the forest.

The food was good. But soon it was all gone. "Now it is my turn," said Fox. "You can sell me."

Tanuki changed into a peasant. He carried Fox to the village. A buyer came. Tanuki had a greedy thought. He whispered to the buyer, "She is not dead. Be safe."

The buyer took Fox away. Tanuki never saw her again. He bought food for himself.

Tanuki was not kind to his son. He did not share the food. Little Tanuki had to find his own berries. He missed his mother.

Little Tanuki thought of his magic. "I can do magic," he told his father.

Tanuki felt a little scared. "Let us have a test," he said. "Change your shape. I will wait on the bridge. I will know you."

Little Tanuki agreed. He went to the bridge. He did not change shape. He hid in a corner.

Tanuki waited on the bridge. Soon, the king came in a big carriage.

"That is my son!" thought Tanuki. He jumped at the carriage. "I found you!" he cried.

The king's guards were angry. They grabbed Tanuki. They threw him into the river. Tanuki got very wet. The guards chased him away.

Little Tanuki saw it all. His father was humbled. Little Tanuki went back to the forest. He lived there in peace.

Greed can make you lose your family. It is better to be kind.

Original Story 1121 words · 5 min read

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How The Wicked Tanuki Was Punished

The hunters had hunted the wood for so many years that no wild animal

was any more to be found in it. You might walk from one end to the

other without ever seeing a hare, or a deer, or a boar, or hearing the

cooing of the doves in their nest. If they were not dead, they had

flown elsewhere. Only three creatures remained alive, and they had

hidden themselves in the thickest part of the forest, high up the

mountain. These were a grey-furred, long-tailed tanuki, his wife the

fox, who was one of his own family, and their little son.

The fox and the tanuki were very clever, prudent beasts, and they also

were skilled in magic, and by this means had escaped the fate of their

unfortunate friends. If they heard the twang of an arrow or saw the

glitter of a spear, ever so far off, they lay very still, and were not

to be tempted from their hiding-place, if their hunger was ever so

great, or the game ever so delicious. “We are not so foolish as to risk

our lives,” they said to each other proudly. But at length there came a

day when, in spite of their prudence, they seemed likely to die of

starvation, for no more food was to be had. Something had to be done,

but they did not know what.

Suddenly a bright thought struck the tanuki. “I have got a plan,” he

cried joyfully to his wife. “I will pretend to be dead, and you must

change yourself into a man, and take me to the village for sale. It

will be easy to find a buyer, tanukis’ skins are always wanted; then

buy some food with the money and come home again. I will manage to

escape somehow, so do not worry about me.”

The fox laughed with delight, and rubbed her paws together with

satisfaction. “Well, next time I will go,” she said, “and you can sell

me.” And then she changed herself into a man, and picking up the stiff

body of the tanuki, set off towards the village. She found him rather

heavy, but it would never have done to let him walk through the wood

and risk his being seen by somebody.

As the tanaki had foretold, buyers were many, and the fox handed him

over to the person who offered the largest price, and hurried to get

some food with the money. The buyer took the tanuki back to his house,

and throwing him into a corner went out. Directly the tanaki found he

was alone, he crept cautiously through a chink of the window, thinking,

as he did so, how lucky it was that he was not a fox, and was able to

climb. Once outside, he hid himself in a ditch till it grew dusk, and

then galloped away into the forest.

While the food lasted they were all three as happy as kings; but there

soon arrived a day when the larder was as empty as ever. “It is my turn

now to pretend to be dead,” cried the fox. So the tanuki changed

himself into a peasant, and started for the village, with his wife’s

body hanging over his shoulder. A buyer was not long in coming forward,

and while they were making the bargain a wicked thought darted into the

tanuki’s head, that if he got rid of the fox there would be more food

for him and his son. So as he put the money in his pocket he whispered

softly to the buyer that the fox was not really dead, and that if he

did not take care she might run away from him. The man did not need

twice telling. He gave the poor fox a blow on the head, which put an

end to her, and the wicked tanuki went smiling to the nearest shop.

In former times he had been very fond of his little son; but since he

had betrayed his wife he seemed to have changed all in a moment, for he

would not give him as much as a bite, and the poor little fellow would

have starved had he not found some nuts and berries to eat, and he

waited on, always hoping that his mother would come back.

At length some notion of the truth began to dawn on him; but he was

careful to let the old tanuki see nothing, though in his own mind he

turned over plans from morning till night, wondering how best he might

avenge his mother.

One morning, as the little tanuki was sitting with his father, he

remembered, with a start, that his mother had taught him all she knew

of magic, and that he could work spells as well as his father, or

perhaps better. “I am as good a wizard as you,” he said suddenly, and a

cold chill ran through the tanuki as he heard him, though he laughed,

and pretended to think it a joke. But the little tanaki stuck to his

point, and at last the father proposed they should have a wager.

“Change yourself into any shape you like,” said he, “and I will

undertake to know you. I will go and wait on the bridge which leads

over the river to the village, and you shall transform yourself into

anything you please, but I will know you through any disguise.” The

little tanuki agreed, and went down the road which his father had

pointed out. But instead of transforming himself into a different

shape, he just hid himself in a corner of the bridge, where he could

see without being seen.

He had not been there long when his father arrived and took up his

place near the middle of the bridge, and soon after the king came by,

followed by a troop of guards and all his court.

“Ah! he thinks that now he has changed himself into a king I shall not

know him,” thought the old tanuki, and as the king passed in his

splendid carriage, borne by his servants, he jumped upon it crying: “I

have won my wager; you cannot deceive me.” But in reality it was he who

had deceived himself. The soldiers, conceiving that their king was

being attacked, seized the tanuki by the legs and flung him over into

the river, and the water closed over him.

And the little tanoki saw it all, and rejoiced that his mother’s death

had been avenged. Then he went back to the forest, and if he has not

found it too lonely, he is probably living there still.

[From Japanische Mährchen.]


Story DNA fairy tale · solemn

Moral

Greed and betrayal ultimately lead to one's own downfall, and justice, even if harsh, will prevail.

Plot Summary

A family of magical tanuki and fox face starvation in a hunted forest. The tanuki devises a plan to feign death, be sold, and escape, which works successfully. When it's his wife's turn, the tanuki, consumed by greed, betrays her to the buyer, leading to her death. The orphaned son, witnessing his father's cruelty, secretly plots revenge. He challenges his father to a transformation wager, but instead hides, allowing his father to mistake the passing king for his son. The tanuki's boastful leap onto the royal carriage leads to his death at the hands of the guards, avenging the fox's murder.

Themes

betrayalrevengeconsequences of greedfilial piety

Emotional Arc

fear to cunning to betrayal to revenge to satisfaction

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (implied, with the three family members), foreshadowing

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (tanuki vs fox, tanuki vs son) and person vs self (tanuki's greed)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: shapeshifting (tanuki and fox transforming into humans), magical knowledge/spells
the forest (as a place of survival and danger)the bridge (as a place of confrontation and fate)

Cultural Context

Origin: Japanese
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is presented as a Japanese folktale, often featuring animals with human-like intelligence and magical abilities, particularly shapeshifting.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. Hunters deplete the forest, leaving only a magical tanuki, his fox wife, and their son facing starvation.
  2. The tanuki devises a plan: he will feign death, his wife will transform into a man and sell him, then he will escape.
  3. The plan succeeds; the tanuki is sold, escapes, and brings food home.
  4. When food runs out again, the fox offers to be sold, and the tanuki transforms into a peasant to sell her.
  5. Driven by greed, the tanuki betrays his wife to the buyer, whispering that she is not truly dead, leading to her murder.
  6. The tanuki becomes cruel and neglectful towards his son, who secretly plans revenge for his mother.
  7. The son, remembering his magical training, challenges his father to a transformation wager.
  8. The father proposes they meet on a bridge, and he will identify his son no matter the disguise.
  9. The son hides on the bridge instead of transforming.
  10. The father arrives, and soon after, the king's procession passes.
  11. Mistaking the king for his transformed son, the tanuki leaps onto the royal carriage, claiming victory.
  12. The king's guards seize the tanuki and throw him into the river, where he drowns.
  13. The son, having witnessed his father's death, feels his mother's death is avenged and returns to the forest.

Characters 5 characters

Tanuki ⚔ antagonist

tanuki adult male

Grey fur, long tail

Attire: None (animal)

Grey fur and long bushy tail

Wicked, selfish, cunning

Image Prompt & Upload
A menacing anthropomorphic raccoon dog with dark, shaggy fur and glowing amber eyes, standing upright with a sinister smirk revealing sharp teeth. Wearing a tattered black kimono with crimson accents and a frayed straw hat tilted at a rakish angle. One paw rests on a gnarled wooden staff topped with a carved fox skull. Long bushy tail swishing behind, claws extended. Sinister posture with hunched shoulders and a cunning, calculating expression. Dark fur with distinctive mask-like markings around the eyes. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature

Fox ◆ supporting

fox adult female

Implied to be similar to Tanuki in fur and tail, but with fox-like features

Attire: None (animal), but when transformed, peasant clothing

Reddish fur and a sly expression

Prudent, clever, loyal (initially)

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A wise and friendly anthropomorphic fox with warm amber fur, intelligent dark eyes, and a gentle smile. It wears a simple green tunic, brown leather vest, and sturdy traveler's boots. Its posture is relaxed and welcoming, one paw resting on a gnarled wooden walking stick. The fox has a bushy tail and pointed ears that perk forward attentively. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Little Tanuki ★ protagonist

tanuki child male

Smaller version of his father, grey fur, long tail

Attire: None (animal)

Small size and determined expression

Loyal, intelligent, vengeful

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A cute young anthropomorphic raccoon dog with soft grey-brown fur, large curious black eyes, and a fluffy striped tail. Wearing a simple blue happi coat over a white shirt, tied with a red sash, and straw sandals. He holds a small wooden walking stick, standing in a cheerful, energetic pose on a sunlit forest path, one paw raised as if waving hello. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Buyer ○ minor

human adult male

Not described

Attire: Simple clothing of a villager

Carrying a tanuki or fox

Gullible, easily manipulated

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A young child around ten years old, with short, tousled brown hair and bright, curious eyes. They wear a simple blue t-shirt, beige shorts, and scuffed sneakers. In one small hand, they clutch a few shiny coins, looking down at them with a slightly determined expression. They stand straight, shoulders back, in a confident yet innocent posture. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

King ○ minor

human adult male

Not described

Attire: Splendid royal robes

Splendid royal carriage

Unsuspecting, regal

Image Prompt & Upload
A young boy monarch, around twelve years old, with a solemn and thoughtful expression. He has short, neatly combed brown hair and wears a simple golden circlet atop his head. His clothing consists of a deep blue velvet tunic with subtle silver embroidery at the collar and cuffs, worn over dark trousers and polished black boots. He stands upright but with a slight, almost hesitant posture, one hand resting lightly on the hilt of a sheathed ceremonial sword at his side. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Deep Forest

outdoor

Thickest part of the forest, high up the mountain, where animals hide

Mood: desolate, secretive

The tanuki, fox, and son live in hiding, planning their survival.

trees undergrowth mountain hiding places
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Late afternoon golden hour light filters through the dense canopy of ancient, towering trees in the deepest part of the mountain forest. Thick gnarled roots snake across the mossy forest floor, tangled with ferns and fallen leaves. Shafts of light illuminate floating dust motes and highlight the deep emerald and jade greens of the foliage. A hidden brook murmurs over smooth stones. The atmosphere is still, quiet, and deeply secluded, with shadows pooling in the hollows between massive tree trunks. Rich browns, deep greens, and accents of golden light dominate. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Village

outdoor

A place where tanuki skins are bought and sold, with shops to buy food

Mood: opportunistic, dangerous

The tanuki and fox go to the village to sell each other for food.

shops houses people market
Image Prompt & Upload
Late afternoon sun casts long shadows across a bustling cobblestone village square. Quaint timber-framed shops with thatched roofs and hanging wooden signs display wares. Crates of vibrant pumpkins, apples, and bundles of herbs line the pathways. Strings of glowing paper lanterns sway between buildings, beginning to glow as dusk approaches. The air is clear, with a soft golden light illuminating the dust motes and the colorful fabrics draped over market stalls. A sense of cozy, prosperous activity fills the air. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Buyer's House

indoor

A house with a window chink

Mood: temporary, unsafe

The tanuki escapes after being sold.

corner window chink ditch outside
Image Prompt & Upload
A quaint, stone-walled cottage with a thatched roof sits at the edge of a moonlit forest clearing on a clear, starry night. A single, narrow chink in a dark wooden window emits a warm, golden glow, casting a thin beam of light onto the dewy grass and wildflowers below. The surrounding ancient trees are draped in silvery moss, and a soft mist clings to the ground. Fireflies drift near the cottage, their lights mirroring the stars above. The atmosphere is quiet, mysterious, and deeply enchanting, with a color palette of deep blues, purples, and warm amber. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Bridge over the River

transitional morning

A bridge leading to the village, with a corner to hide in

Mood: tense, deceptive

The little tanuki tricks his father, leading to the father's demise.

river stone bridge hiding place road
Image Prompt & Upload
At dusk, a weathered stone bridge arches over a gently flowing river, its mossy surface catching the last golden rays of sunset. The bridge leads toward a distant cluster of thatched-roof cottages with glowing amber windows nestled in a valley. To the left of the bridge, a thick, ancient willow tree with drooping branches creates a natural, shadowy alcove by the water's edge. The sky is a gradient of deep violet and peach, with the first stars appearing. The river reflects the sky and the warm village lights, while the surrounding forest is dense with dark pines and birch trees. The air feels still and cool, with a hint of evening mist rising from the water. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration