The Devil's Sooty Brother
by Brothers Grimm · from Household Tales
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, Hans had no money. He had no food. He was very, very sad.
Hans walked into a big forest. He met a funny little magic man. "Work for me!" said the little man. "But what do I do?" said Hans. The little man smiled. "You sweep. You stir pots. But you cannot wash. You cannot cut your hair." Hans laughed. "That is silly!" But he said yes. He was so hungry.
The little man took Hans down, down, down. They went to a big smoky kitchen. "Sweep the floors," said the little man. "Stir the big pots. Do not look inside!" Then the little man left.
Hans swept the floors. He stirred the pots. But he was so curious! He peeked into the first pot. A grumpy old man sat in warm soup. "I know you!" said Hans. "You were mean to me!" He stirred the soup more.
He peeked into the second pot. A grumpy old man sat in warm soup. "I know you too!" said Hans. He stirred that soup more.
He peeked into the third pot. A grumpy old man sat in warm soup. "Ha!" said Hans. He stirred that soup too.
A long time passed. It felt very short. Hans got very messy. His hair grew long. His face got dirty. The little magic man came back. "Good work, Hans!" he said. "Here is your pay." He gave Hans a bag. Hans looked inside. It was full of dirt. "Just dirt?" said Hans. He was sad.
Hans walked up into the sun. He opened his bag again. The dirt was gone! Now it was shiny, shiny gold! "Wow!" said Hans. He was so happy.
Hans went to a town. He walked to an inn. The innkeeper saw him. "Go away!" he said. "You are too dirty!" But Hans showed his gold. "Come in, come in!" said the innkeeper.
Hans ate good food. He slept in a warm bed. But the mean innkeeper took his gold bag! Oh no!
Hans went back to the little magic man. "He took my gold!" said Hans. The little man gave Hans a bath. He gave him new clothes. He gave him a new bag of dirt. "Go tell him," said the little man. "Give the gold back. Or I will come get him!"
Hans told the innkeeper. The innkeeper was very scared. He gave all the gold back. Now Hans had lots of gold!
Hans loved to play music. One day he played for a king. The king loved it! "How nice!" said the king. The kind princess liked Hans too. They became good friends. Then they got married.
And Hans was king. He was never hungry again. And they all lived happily ever after.
Original Story
The Devil's sooty brother
A fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm
A disbanded soldier had nothing to live on, and did not know how to get on. So he went out into the forest and when he had walked for a short time, he met a little man who was, however, the Devil. The little man said to him, "What ails you, you seem so very sorrowful?" Then the soldier said, "I am hungry, but have no money." The Devil said, "If you will hire yourself to me, and be my serving-man, you shall have enough for all your life? You shall serve me for seven years, and after that you shall again be free. But one thing I must tell you, and that is, you must not wash, comb, or trim yourself, or cut your hair or nails, or wipe the water from your eyes." The soldier said, "All right, if there is no help for it," and went off with the little man, who straightway led him down into hell. Then he told him what he had to do. He was to poke the fire under the kettles wherein the hell-broth was stewing, keep the house clean, drive all the sweepings behind the doors, and see that everything was in order, but if he once peeped into the kettles, it would go ill with him. The soldier said, "Good, I will take care." And then the old Devil went out again on his wanderings, and the soldier entered upon his new duties, made the fire, and swept the dirt well behind the doors, just as he had been bidden. When the old Devil came back again, he looked to see if all had been done, appeared satisfied, and went forth a second time. The soldier now took a good look on every side; the kettles were standing all round hell with a mighty fire below them, and inside they were boiling and sputtering. He would have given anything to look inside them, if the Devil had not so particularly forbidden him: at last, he could no longer restrain himself, slightly raised the lid of the first kettle, and peeped in, and there he saw his former corporal shut in. "Aha, old bird!" said he, "Do I meet you here? You once had me in your power, now I have you," and he quickly let the lid fall, poked the fire, and added a fresh log. After that, he went to the second kettle, raised its lid also a little, and peeped in; his former ensign was in that. "Aha, old bird, so I find you here! You once had me in your power, now I have you." He closed the lid again, and fetched yet another log to make it really hot. Then he wanted to see who might be sitting up in the third kettle it was actually be but a general. "Aha, old bird, do I meet you here? Once you had me in your power, now I have you." And he fetched the bellows and made hell-fire blaze right under him. So he did his work seven years in hell, did not wash, comb, or trim himself, or cut his hair or nails, or wash the water out of his eyes, and the seven years seemed so short to him that he thought he had only been half a year. Now when the time had fully gone by, the Devil came and said, "Well Hans, what have you done?" - "I poked the fire under the kettles, and I have swept all the dirt well behind the doors." - "But you have peeped into the kettles as well; it is lucky for you that you added fresh logs to them, or else your life would have been forfeited; now that your time is up, will you go home again?" - "Yes," said the soldier, "I should very much like to see what my father is doing at home." The Devil said, "In order that you may receive the wages you have earned, go and fill your knapsack full of the sweepings, and take it home with you. You must also go unwashed and uncombed, with long hair on your head and beard, and with uncut nails and dim eyes, and when you are asked whence you come, you must say, 'From hell,' and when you are asked who you are, you are to say, 'The Devil's sooty brother, and my King as well.'" The soldier held his peace, and did as the Devil bade him, but he was not at all satisfied with his wages.
Then as soon as he was up in the forest again, he took his knapsack from his back, to empty it, but on opening it, the sweepings had become pure gold. "I should never have expected that," said he, and was well pleased, and entered the town. The landlord was standing in front of the inn, and when he saw the soldier approaching, he was terrified, because Hans looked so horrible, worse than a scare-crow. He called to him and asked, "Whence comest thou?" - "From hell." - "Who art thou?" - "The Devil's sooty brother, and my King as well." Then the host would not let him enter, but when Hans showed him the gold, he came and unlatched the door himself. Hans then ordered the best room and attendance, ate, and drank his fill, but neither washed nor combed himself as the Devil had bidden him, and at last lay down to sleep. But the knapsack full of gold remained before the eyes of the landlord, and left him no peace, and during the night he crept in and stole it away.
Next morning, however, when Hans got up and wanted to pay the landlord and travel further, behold his knapsack was gone! But he soon composed himself and thought, "Thou hast been unfortunate from no fault of thine own," and straightway went back again to hell, complained of his misfortune to the old Devil, and begged for his help. The Devil said, "Seat yourself, I will wash, comb, and trim you, cut your hair and nails, and wash your eyes for you," and when he had done with him, he gave him the knapsack back again full of sweepings, and said, "Go and tell the landlord that he must return you your money, or else I will come and fetch him, and he shall poke the fire in your place." Hans went up and said to the landlord, "Thou hast stolen my money; if thou dost not return it, thou shalt go down to hell in my place, and wilt look as horrible as I." Then the landlord gave him the money, and more besides, only begging him to keep it secret, and Hans was now a rich man.
He set out on his way home to his father, bought himself a shabby smock-frock to wear, and strolled about making music, for he had learned to do that while he was with the Devil in hell. There was however, an old King in that country, before whom he had to play, and the King was so delighted with his playing, that he promised him his eldest daughter in marriage. But when she heard that she was to be married to a common fellow in a smock-frock, she said, "Rather than do that, I would go into the deepest water." Then the King gave him the youngest, who was quite willing to do it to please her father, and thus the Devil's sooty brother got the King's daughter, and when the aged King died, the whole kingdom likewise.
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Story DNA
Moral
Even in the most dire circumstances, one can find fortune and rise above their station through unexpected means and a bit of luck.
Plot Summary
A penniless soldier makes a seven-year pact with the Devil to work in hell, agreeing not to groom himself. While there, he secretly adds fuel to the fires of his former superiors, who are being punished. Upon completing his service, he receives sweepings that turn into gold, but is robbed by an innkeeper. The soldier returns to the Devil for help, who cleans him, restores his wealth, and threatens the innkeeper. Now rich, the soldier marries a princess and eventually inherits a kingdom, having transformed from a destitute man to a powerful ruler.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects common societal anxieties of soldiers after wars, facing unemployment and poverty. The idea of hell as a literal place with specific tasks is a common folk belief.
Plot Beats (14)
- A penniless soldier meets the Devil in the forest and agrees to serve him for seven years in hell, under strict conditions of not washing or grooming.
- In hell, the soldier's duties include stoking fires and sweeping, but he is forbidden from looking into the kettles.
- Despite the warning, the soldier peeks into three kettles, finding his former corporal, ensign, and general, and adds more fuel to their fires.
- After seven years, which feel like six months, the Devil acknowledges his service and gives him a knapsack full of sweepings as payment.
- The soldier leaves hell, and the sweepings in his knapsack transform into pure gold.
- He enters a town, looking disheveled but wealthy, and frightens an innkeeper who initially refuses him entry but relents upon seeing the gold.
- The soldier enjoys his wealth, but the innkeeper steals his gold during the night.
- The soldier returns to hell, explains his misfortune to the Devil, who then cleans him and returns his knapsack, again filled with sweepings that turn to gold.
- The Devil instructs the soldier to confront the innkeeper, threatening to take the innkeeper to hell if the money isn't returned.
- The innkeeper, terrified, returns the money and more, making the soldier very rich.
- The soldier buys a smock-frock and travels, making music, which he learned in hell.
- He plays for a King, who is so impressed he offers his eldest daughter in marriage, but she refuses.
- The King then offers his youngest daughter, who agrees to marry the soldier to please her father.
- The soldier marries the princess and, upon the King's death, inherits the entire kingdom.
Characters
Hans ★ protagonist
Initially clean-shaven and neat, later unwashed, unkempt, with long hair, beard, uncut nails, and dim eyes, eventually cleaned up and handsome.
Attire: Initially a soldier's uniform, then rags, then a smock-frock, and finally royal garments.
Resourceful, opportunistic, and ultimately fortunate.
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A young man in his late teens with a lean, athletic build and a determined expression. He has short, tousled brown hair and bright, watchful eyes. He is dressed in a simple, well-worn tunic of faded blue over brown trousers and sturdy leather boots. A small leather satchel is slung over his shoulder. He stands confidently on a dirt path, one hand resting on a wooden walking staff, looking forward as if ready for an adventure. The background is a soft-focus forest edge with dappled sunlight. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Devil ⚔ antagonist
Described as a 'little man'. Sooty.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but infer infernal attire.
Deceptive, pragmatic, and bound by contracts.
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A malevolent figure with dark crimson skin, sharp curved horns emerging from his temples, and glowing ember-yellow eyes. He has a pointed goatee, a sly smirk revealing sharp teeth, and slicked-back black hair. Dressed in an elegant black tailcoat over a deep red waistcoat, with fitted trousers that end in cloven hooves. A slender, pointed tail curls from his back. He stands with a confident, slightly leaning posture, one hand extended palm-up as if presenting a bargain, the other tucked behind his back. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Landlord ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but likely stout and prosperous-looking.
Attire: Typical attire for a landlord of the time.
Greedy, opportunistic, and easily intimidated.
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A middle-aged man with a stern expression, deep-set eyes, and a neatly trimmed mustache. He wears a dark wool waistcoat over a white shirt with rolled sleeves, sturdy trousers, and polished boots. His posture is rigid and authoritative, arms crossed over his chest, a large ring of iron keys hanging from his belt. A pocket watch chain is visible. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but inferred to be old and regal.
Attire: Royal robes and crown.
Generous, easily pleased, and somewhat detached from his daughters' feelings.
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A regal older man in his sixties with a neatly trimmed white beard and kind, wise eyes. He wears a heavy crimson velvet robe with gold embroidery over royal blue tunic and trousers. A large golden crown with red gems sits atop his head. He stands upright, holding a ceremonial sword in one hand and a jeweled orb in the other, a slight dignified smile on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature
Eldest Daughter ○ minor
Not explicitly described, but inferred to be beautiful and of noble bearing.
Attire: Fine gowns and jewelry.
Proud, disdainful, and unwilling to marry beneath her station.
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A young girl around thirteen years old with a kind, gentle expression. She has long, chestnut brown hair tied back in a simple braid with a few loose strands framing her face. She wears a modest, faded blue linen dress with a patched cream-colored apron over it. Her posture is straight but relaxed, holding a woven basket of wildflowers in her hands. She looks directly at the viewer with a slight, warm smile. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Youngest Daughter ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but inferred to be less proud and more obedient than her sister.
Attire: Fine gowns and jewelry.
Obedient, dutiful, and willing to please her father.
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A young woman in her late teens with a kind, gentle expression and soft brown hair loosely braided over one shoulder. She wears a simple but well-made dress of faded blue linen with a white apron, her sleeves rolled up to the elbows. Her posture is humble and attentive, standing with hands clasped gently in front of her. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Deep Forest
A dense forest where the soldier wanders, lost and hungry.
Mood: desolate, hopeless
The soldier meets the Devil and makes his pact.
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Deep forest at dusk, towering ancient trees with gnarled trunks and thick canopies blocking most of the fading sunlight, dim golden rays piercing through gaps in the leaves, dense undergrowth of ferns and twisted roots covering the forest floor, moss-covered fallen logs, a barely visible narrow dirt path winding between massive tree trunks, misty atmosphere with soft haze between the trees, deep emerald and shadowy green color palette with hints of amber light, mysterious and slightly ominous mood, no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Hell's Kitchen
A fiery cavern filled with kettles of boiling hell-broth.
Mood: oppressive, dangerous, chaotic
The soldier serves the Devil, tending the fires and tormenting his former superiors.
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A vast, subterranean cavern of jagged obsidian and basalt, illuminated by the hellish glow of rivers of lava flowing in deep channels. Massive, soot-blackened iron kettles, some large as houses, bubble and churn with luminous, crimson hell-broth over perpetual fires. The air shimmers with intense heat haze. Stalactites drip with molten rock, and the rough cavern walls are stained with streaks of orange and black. Embers float upward through sulfurous, swirling steam. The scene is a symphony of fiery reds, deep oranges, and oppressive shadows, with the constant, implied roar of boiling liquid and crackling flames. No border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Inn Room
A comfortable room in an inn, contrasted with the soldier's unwashed state.
Mood: deceptive, greedy
The landlord steals the soldier's gold, leading to the second deal with the Devil.
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A cozy inn room at dusk, warm lamplight glowing from a wrought-iron chandelier. Thick timber beams support a low ceiling, walls of rough-hewn stone and dark wood paneling. A neatly made bed with a thick quilt and plump pillows sits against one wall. A small fireplace crackles with embers. On a sturdy oak table, a ceramic pitcher and basin of clean water sit beside a half-burned candle. A single window shows a twilight sky of deep blue and purple. The floor is wide wooden planks, scattered with a woven rug. Atmosphere is quiet, clean, and inviting, contrasting with the weariness of travel outside. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
Royal Palace
A grand palace where the king resides and holds court.
Mood: formal, opulent
The soldier's musical talent impresses the king, leading to his marriage to the princess and eventual inheritance of the kingdom.
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Sunrise light bathes a grand royal palace of white marble and gold filigree, its soaring spires and domed roofs gleaming. The vast courtyard features symmetrical hedges, blooming rose gardens, and crystalline fountains. Long, arched windows reflect the pink and orange dawn sky. The atmosphere is serene, majestic, and pristine. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
